|Reviews for Journal Entries|
| ayami235 chapter 17 . 8/21/2010
Hey,ur story was really intersting,especially for first try.
however,I was expecting a lil more of "chick flick" moments in da last chap,anyways good work,keep it up.
| SpookyClaire chapter 7 . 2/19/2007
Good! He's finally realizing it's not all about him!
| SpookyClaire chapter 6 . 2/19/2007
Sam is being such a self-centered little shit!
| SpookyClaire chapter 5 . 2/19/2007
Can I just say one thing before I go on reading?
Sam has no right to be such a fuckhole! He was the one in the wrong, not Dean! He had ABSOLUTLY no right to say those things to Dean!
Ok, that's all I wanted to say. *excitedly rushes off to read more*
| Dawn Vesper chapter 17 . 9/17/2006
very good- heartfelt! but very sad! good ending!
| Heart Of The Wizard chapter 17 . 8/14/2006
Loved the story! Just wish there had been a bit more 'brotherly love' in this last chapter. Great job!
| Heart Of The Wizard chapter 2 . 8/14/2006
I usually wait till the last chapter to review but this chappie got my attention. The name "Brittney" caught my eye. I have read thousands of fanfics and have yet to read one that had my name in it. Thought that was really cool! Anyway, so far stories really good!
| jka1 chapter 17 . 6/15/2006
for your first fic i think it was absolutely fantastic i felt really sorry for dean he had such a bad childhood and he sacrificed alot for sam anyway well done -
| SerenityChaos chapter 17 . 4/8/2006
Nope, not throwing things at you. I know what you mean about the last being the worst to write, but you did an excellent job. Looking forward to reading more of your fics. -Chaos
| LoveJeter chapter 17 . 3/27/2006
OK I lied...Said I wasn't gonna read the rest til tonight but the boss left for the day so I thought what the hay! LOL Was kinda scared that Sam would keep walking into the light(hate fanfics where the guys die) but glad when he came out and Dean was there to save him.
I liked how you went back and forth with their POVs telling what was going around them & in their minds.
I also liked the end. I think you wrapped it up well. I especially like the finish of how he went into his little dream world of normalcy. Good job!
| LoveJeter chapter 6 . 3/27/2006
Great story so far. I love that its done from Sams POV. I really hate how I have to go back to work and leave at the cliffhanger before Sam reads the 12/12 journal entry. I'll be longing for 8 pm tonight when I can finally get back to reading the rest.
| Rita21 chapter 1 . 2/17/2006
newbie my ass! you write great, I kept laughing when I read, "Written, in cursive, was Dean Winchester". Hahahaha, imagine Dean being a softie little boy. I'll read the other chapters and review at the end with another name(E N I 24 G M A) because I want to write new fanfics on it and... well... darn thing didnt send me the verification email so it might take a while... I loved this chapter and I'm sure the rest will be great. You may be a newbie at FF.N but you're no newbie at writing.
| Katie 452 chapter 17 . 1/2/2006
AMAZING. sad to see it go.
| sinful delight chapter 17 . 12/28/2005
Great story! I know exactly what you mean with writing the last chapter of a story. It's always such a pain! You did a great job of it... really. I loved this last chapter, all of the chapters really. You got the brothers down just right with their witty banter and avoidance of all things emotional. The part where Sam sees Jess was really touching. So bitter sweet. For a first story, you did a wonderful job! I look forward to reading more stories from you in the future.
| SVOC Luva chapter 17 . 12/28/2005
this fic was awesome i loved it!