Reviews for Blood Tears
Guest chapter 1 . 7/28
You don't like him... But make him likeable by having him exercise restraint. Now if only every other author did that with characters they didn't like.
1337Pwny chapter 1 . 7/23
Really touching ;-;
shadowrallen chapter 1 . 6/24/2013
Dessel Ordo chapter 1 . 5/21/2013
very well done story. Well written and well thought out.
dsty292 chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Nice oneshot. It felt like you wanted to delve deeper and darker but pulled back... I think it would have been even better if you'd gone all the way in. Either way, nice and short read.
Ryuus2 chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
This was...a little hard to read. Less hard than a lot of Naruto stories I've read, but noticably harder than normal for me. If there is ever a part two to this, might I suggest a scene? It plays out as such: Ritsuko goes into an operating room to assist with the harvesting of organs from two fresh donor bodies. The bodies just happen to be the still breathing kidnappers. I know that the idea is fairly gruesome, but I feel that Ritsuko, and othersa, would consider it fair punishment for guys who consider toturing a child as a good warmup to raping another child.

Kaji turning down Misato's offer is actually fairly in-character for him. Though he is a womanizing jerk, he isn't heartless, and would have gone looking for the kidss regardless of Misato's incentive.

Keep up the great, if not so extreme, work.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
I loved that! That was awesome! Great job!
QChronoD chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
Awesome story. One of the best angst/tragedies for Eva that I've read.

Transplant is about the only Eva story that brings more tears to my eyes.

Keep up the great work!
GovernorDerekthe2nd chapter 1 . 5/3/2010
I love it!
bubble.duckie chapter 1 . 11/1/2009
That was a nice read. Could have added more fluff to make AXS relationship more deep. I'll be looking out for your future fics. Thanks!
The Train chapter 1 . 2/18/2009
All blood and gore aside, this is a very touching and heartfelt story. I have always believed that "Greater love hath no man than to lay his life down for a friend" or in this case someone you love. To put Shingi through this just reveals how strong a character he is and how he always puts others before himself. I agree I personally don't a Shingi/Asuka romance either but I'm make an exception on this one. Excellemt work.
Mike Kromer chapter 1 . 1/28/2009
Man talk bout emotional, keep up ze good work
TheVaughnenator chapter 1 . 2/15/2008
At first I wasn't gonna read it, but, curiosity got the better of me. And I'm glad that no one(important)died. And even more relieved that shinji didn't scream. Over all I feel it was a great story, but I feel Asuka was a bit early to start loving Shinji. An example, like when she called him "baby". I feel she should of realized her love around the time she was telling Misato about the 'incedent'. But then again I am a bit picky, and this is just an opinion. So over all I give it a 4.5 outta 5. Keep up the good work.

Also, to all the people saying that was pretty 'weak' or 'ameture' tourture. Consider the situation. A simple scream and they would both have to live with the consequences of that horrible day. Now, me personally I woulda screamed at the knife twisting in my leg depending on the circumstances. And I can't say for sure if I could stand the soldering tool. And the fact he went through all that without screaming, any other scenario would just seem unrealistic, especially for a teenager like Shinji. Once again this is just my opinion, and sorry for the long review, and thank you for your time _
CrazyKidDeath chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
really good story, a little rough but the concept is great.
supermonk chapter 1 . 8/15/2007
Nice. But when you said torture, I thought you meant TORTURE. Originality wise, I give the torture scenes, on a scale of 1 to 10, a three. C'mon, jumper cables and a little knife play, that's baby food. Though, the soldering iron was a nice touch.

Overall, I give this fic a seven.

It was good but it could have been so much better.
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