|Reviews for Noticing Adam|
| alphalover chapter 36 . 3/14/2013
Nice new chapter! I really hope that Randor figures it out soon because you are torturing me with suspense!
| Anymousesqueek chapter 35 . 3/11/2013
I love this story. I hope you post more soon, I'm looking forward to where this story is going.
| JustLucky05 chapter 35 . 3/4/2013
I love it! great chapter! It was great to see the family dinamics at work especially between the ones that know the secret and can talk about it. I love Teela's reactions to the courtiers and really enjoy the way Adam's and Teela's relationship is developing. The Character developement is both believable and enjoyable. keep up the great work, I can't wait to see what you do next...please post again soon.
| Deathmvp chapter 35 . 3/3/2013
Great work on this chapter. It was well writen here.
| Adeela chapter 35 . 3/3/2013
Nice to see an update finally ;) Loved the scenes between Adam and Teela...looking forward to Randor's and Adam's escape with hidden twists ;) post soon :)
| alphalover chapter 35 . 3/3/2013
My goodness. Pitch perfect. Wow. Loved seeing regal Adam showing who he truly is in his own skin. And his heartfelt talk with feels showed they had moved past their awkward uncertainty into a deep mature relationship. Before they were boy and girl but now man and woman. Excellent writing as always.
| EroSlackerMicha chapter 35 . 3/3/2013
like Briar Rabbit, use his smarts. Adam and Randor will get out. heck I can almost see it in old Filmation animation...(snicker)
keep up the good work
| Guest chapter 34 . 3/1/2013
Great chapter as it seemss you are going for the level of Horde Prime
| Guest chapter 19 . 2/27/2013
found this a few days ago, after 7 days of insensitively reading i decided to review and let you know i love it. Now on to the next chapter!
| livs2write chapter 34 . 2/25/2013
Another well written chapter! I really like the way the Sorceress interacted with King Randor and showed him not only scenes from the past, but how his attitude had changed over the years. Skeletor just had to show up...
I am really enjoying this tale and can hardly wait for another update!
| JustLucky05 chapter 34 . 2/25/2013
Another great chapter! I'm glad the sorceress was able to explain to Randor that most of the others were able to find out Adam's secret on their own, and that HE was the only one preventing him from learning the truth. The addition of Teela's secret was a clever thought. Now he understands that some secrets have to be kept in order to protect loved ones. I love what you are doing here, keep up the geat work. I can't wait to see what you do next. Please post again soon.
| Adeela chapter 34 . 2/24/2013
finally an update! great chapter..Sorceross secret finally revealed to Randor may help him to change his views about her,Duncan and Adam...nw waiting for the next one :)
| foxy11814 chapter 34 . 2/24/2013
Hi, everyone! I just wanted to say thanks for the wonderful comments, and I wanted to respond to the question below about Keldor and answer it where everyone could see.
Ever since the whole Keldor revelation came to light, I always have in the back of my mind that Skeletor is Keldor even when I watch the 80's cartoon (even though I know they had no idea about this story arc back then.) In any case, while I do accept Skeletor as Keldor in all of my stories, I don't think that is going to play a role in "Noticing Adam," because this story is based on the original show and Adam doesn't know about Keldor in that one. To be perfectly honest, I actually want to base a future story on that concept which is why I haven't mentioned it in this one. It will be with the 80's version of the show but introduce the fact that Skeletor is Keldor. I've been planning that for a while since I haven't seen a lot of stories do so. So, as soon as I'm finished with this story, you'll probably see that one pop up at some point. It won't be too long in the future.
| Deathmvp chapter 34 . 2/24/2013
Great work on showing the meeting in this chapter. I loved how you did it. I wounder if Randor's seeing Skeletors intrest in his son will drive the point home even more in the coming chapters.
Also great work with showing who Tela's mom is and why she must do it. I do wounder if that will make him look at her any diffrently. Only thing I do wish was he would have asked her is Adam even alowed to be with her kid.
| EroSlackerMicha chapter 34 . 2/24/2013
poor Randor. he did not need this. just out of curiosity are you using the backstory of Skeletor being Keldor, Randor's brother?
when I learned of that years ago I was like talk about a family feud. Skeletor facing off with his nephew and brother always made me look at the old cartoon and rethink everything that happened.
keep up the good work