Reviews for Crash
DrGiggles chapter 1 . 12/8/2015
Beautifully written! Goodbye Jayne :(
iimagineyou chapter 1 . 12/4/2006
Erg? What? Arg! ...Now for some actual words. This series is such a joy to read, it's so damn good.
Yain chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
I love this story! You write so well, and it's funny and interesting, and I hope you keep writing more after you finish this story.
tulzdavampslayer chapter 1 . 12/10/2005

Katinka31 chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
He seems to sigh as he turns back, and she can feel the exhale, the air-bubbles rising to the surface and break there, the only evidence there was anything hiding under the waves at all.

You're created some gorgeous, gorgeous imagery here, and the River/Jayne vibe is all the more enjoyable for its subtle, nuanced nature. :) Brava!
Tan-is-a-fan chapter 1 . 12/9/2005
Aww... He really left? Darn. He'll come back though, right? Right?

I loved this bit, especially the waves metaphor. You described it beautifully and made it fit perfectly with River's reaction to Jayne's departure. I wish I could write that well. It's a perfect example of what a fantastic writer you are.

*Hug* for the great update, looking forward to the next bit!
winkingannie chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
Um...should we be worried about River touching the knives?

Make Jayne come back!

Leology chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
I hope you post again soon!
bugchicklv chapter 1 . 12/8/2005
*CRIES* Bring him back. Please?