|Reviews for Untitled|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/29/2015
Carth is a... I don't think jerk is a big enough word, try heartless,Gammorraon pig-faced jerk, and more, like it for a family story though.
| EbonySapphire chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
So cute who knew Canderous would make a great daddy lol.
| RavenJinn chapter 1 . 11/11/2011
Wow, alot of stolen dialog from Disney movies. Couldn't get past the Lion King sceane. Would be much better if you made this your own work and not rehashed from kids movies.
| machievelli chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Posted 19 February 2011 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critics Two Cents.
Post KOTOR: Carth Canderous and Revan settle down, but not as you might think...
The piece flows well, Revan and Canderous as parents was so much fun, and the twins a riot.
| Atra Ventus chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
Do you even realize how ridiculous it is that you used dialogue from the Lion King? I mean, seriously?
| Giselle Vigee-Lebrun chapter 1 . 11/23/2008
Nice story...i get the feeling from this that varth and revan r still in love and that the relationship between canderous and her is more a freindship then anything even if they r married and have twins...but thats just how i see it and NO i'm not a carth fan to tell u the truth i dont like carth his personality is well...a pain...
| bmjewell chapter 1 . 4/10/2008
Wow! Great story! I've always been a Carth girl myself but lately I'm starting to like the Canderous/Revan pairing, I think you may have just inspired me to start my own story! hee hee! Yay!
| Buscadora chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I liked it. It's really good.
The twins are cute xD
I always thought Canderous and Revan are a nice couple. Carth have more fans, though.
| snarryvader81 chapter 1 . 1/13/2008
You *should* be proud of this one shot. I liked it very, very much.
-snarryvader81 (aka Anna)
PS: I recognize some of the references to 'Lion King', but did the talk of second breakfast and elevensies refer to Lord of the Rings? Just wondering. :)
| Nelarun chapter 1 . 1/2/2008
This was so good! I mean absolutely amazingly good! You so have to do more on this arc. Please?
| Queenofinsanity chapter 1 . 11/5/2006
I can just imagine all this going on, too.
| deanna yates chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
i actually read a bunch of your stories. you have a lot of talent already even though you are young...although im like a year older. but its good to see another kotor fan! i liked this story can canderous and mandos are awesome...keep on writing!
| Leah C chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
This was really good. Yay carth bashing, I'm really not to keen on him i like the canderous/ reven stuff its a whole lot better thanks for writing this it was really good. you should write a sequil to it.
| Estora chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Aw, but that's so sweet! Tacha and Tasha Ordo, Mandalorian-Jedi...CUTE AS!
~ Estora ~
| Pretty Revan chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
There is three references from the Lion King.
This is so good because Canderous is best suited for Revan.