|Reviews for The Demon's Contract|
| Lazy pants chapter 1 . 2/20
Ranma's starting to sound like Light Yagami... And he's using Kasumi like Misa Amané!
| tuatara chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
Why would anyone ever enjoy reading about this piece of human excrement supposedly called Ranma Saotome? Why do people find such wastes of humanity remotely appealing? It’s completely beyond me, and I’m frankly glad for that.
| irnzenmonk chapter 3 . 5/19/2013
this is an awesome story ne
| CMVreud chapter 1 . 4/25/2013
I wouldn't call this chapter 'Incoming Demon' but more 'Change of epic Alignment', well i would, but then I thought about it and decided that I couldn't let that stand there so.
At least he got no arrow to the knee.
| LuckyShadowWolf chapter 3 . 4/21/2013
Well I have to say that this is a very entertaining xstory and is a truly original idea! Can't wait to see what else you have in store espicially for Happosai and Colonge. Also congrats for having your daughter!
| shugokage chapter 3 . 4/16/2013
I am so sad to see there is not more because I was enjoying this story so much so thanks!
| Dragish chapter 3 . 4/13/2013
I really enjoyed this story. The Insidious way MAra is slowly warping Ranma's sensibilities is intriguing.
| Ibskib chapter 3 . 4/8/2013
As portrayed here, Kasumi's life is really heartbreaking, but then again Ranma 1/2 is full of broken people, ripe for a bit of fridge horror.
| Ibskib chapter 1 . 4/8/2013
I'm a bit confused about what cruel, but necessary questions, Ranma asked Kasumi, and why it lead to her beating up her dad, hopefully that will be answered next chapter.
| Guest chapter 3 . 3/22/2013
A wonderful and interesting story. Please continue it someday.
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/15/2013
Only the good fics die young... I wish this was back up again
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/12/2013
You were one of the best.
One of the few we could count on finishing a story.
This wonderful piece of work has been ignored for over 5 years!
| Byakugan789 chapter 3 . 11/16/2012
...you took psyche class in college didn't you? It's a reasonable breakdown of kasumi i'll easily admit, but when the girl wrote the charactor i don't think mrs takahashi looked that deeply into her charactor. the clasically beautiful saint is a both very traditional and very popular manga and folk tale charactor in japan. I don't think you can find a japanese story without one hanging around somewhere.
Regardless, beautiful chapter. It's a real pity you stopped writing it. I'd beg to take it up, but from what I've seen i don't think i'd do it justice.
| Byakugan789 chapter 2 . 11/16/2012
definatly the second school. Very nice chapter.
read a few stories where ranma learns how to generate lightning. One was like avatar the last air bender, seperating yin from yang and pushing in the direction of the strike. the other was about hot and cold ki. place the two opposing fields together and you got lightning. to speed the charge you could increase the difference in the temperatures, the amount of ki being used for each field or shorten the distance between the fields focal points. a lot of them stopped before he figured out how to throw it, but one had him modifye moko takabisha into a light speed beam attack and directed the lightning with a miniscule version of that when he didn't simply hit you while charged.
| Byakugan789 chapter 1 . 11/16/2012
ROFLMAO, almost literally. I was actually doubled up in my chair for the better part of the story. I suppose Ill find out your opinion in the next two chapters but i was wondering if you subscribed to the ranma is an idiot club or the philosophy where ranma's really pretty smart but his utter lack of social and academic education means it makes little difference? the first one makes a relativly amusing repetative comody where as the second has a thousand varying qualities and plotlines depending on how the writer handels it.