Reviews for Desert Protectors
LuciMoon chapter 24 . 8/15
I may have told you this before, but I absolutely love this plot line and the new characters are great!
the-princess-of-quite-a-lot chapter 3 . 5/30
Runes was taught by Bathsheda Babbling. Muggle studies was Charity Burbage. Love your fic!
Sky Art chapter 7 . 5/11
Right before the lemon you said blue eye but before you said that he had violet eye
Beth9891 chapter 24 . 4/1
Wonderful story! Interesting setting and characters and I liked how you wrapped everything up!
anonymous chapter 2 . 3/25
Please correct spelling mistakes
fairyprncss90 chapter 15 . 3/20
i just added that and i got 100. how did you get 98? i'm confused, but never mind that great story can't wait to see what else you got
GotNoName123 chapter 4 . 2/27
I think it's supposed to be spelled with a K and not a C to said proparly
ShadowThief126 chapter 24 . 2/2
I loved the whole dessert concept. It was well written with great character. I was just a little confused by the abrupt end.
ShadowFireHime-Sama chapter 24 . 6/10/2015
simply beautiful what an amazing story and THANK YOU for putting Ardeth in the story he is my all time favorite Mummy character :)
wonderwomanconverse chapter 15 . 5/17/2015
I was hesitant to read this story, because i didn't know what to expect but ... I am so glad that I did cause its AWESOME! I love this story !
Guest chapter 24 . 1/3/2015
Awww no epilogue?
WinterSoulZ chapter 7 . 11/20/2014
You used formal and informal Arabic in here
WinterSoulZ chapter 5 . 11/20/2014
Egypt and most Middle East country's use Arabic as their main and first language
WinterSoulZ chapter 4 . 11/20/2014
Really so far the story is good but you should research first before you write. Like in KSA kingdom of Saudi Arabia which is where I'm from we only have one ruling family there are not many tribes anymore
But like I said you should research first
SystematicChaos95 chapter 13 . 11/5/2014
It's good that you're including more conversations.
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