Reviews for Desert Protectors
GenkaiFan chapter 2 . 3/23
Good story premise, spelling and character names (sp) need to be addressed.
Minerva...not Manerva
scar...not scare for his lightning bolt.
I would suggest you go back and correct your mistakes and polish this story up a bit. It has great potential.
The Frau-GenkaiFan's writing partner
Sakura Lisel chapter 17 . 12/30/2013
*lol* It would be funny if the old coot had the NERVE to try and crash the wedding, thinking the Majai WON'T do anything PAINFUL to him for coming uninvited to Kres' wedding.
kaito394 chapter 24 . 12/19/2013
loved this story sad to see it end
Gracealma chapter 24 . 11/16/2013
Cool story. Love it too where Kres didn't need to go back to the wizarding world.
notsofrilly chapter 24 . 11/7/2013
Oh, this was sweet. Now Kres can live in peace without Voldemort ruining his life
nouch chapter 24 . 11/7/2013
Thanks a lot for this story !
I really enjoy it :)
Fafnir The Greedy chapter 12 . 10/20/2013
I don't mean to be rude but you got the surah(prayer) wrong its - Bismil-laahi rrahmaani rrahiim.
Al-hamdu lil-laahi rabbil-‘aalamin.
Ar-rahmaani rrahiim.
Maaliki yaumid-diin.
Iyaaka na’budu va iyaaka nasta’iin.
Ihdina ssiraatal-mustakiim.
Siraatol-lathiyna an’amta ‘alayhim, gayril-magduubi ‘alayhim va lad-doolliin. Amen.
...Also you do know that the islamic religion has no tolerance for homosexuality? yeah just saying..
Aire5 chapter 7 . 10/17/2013
ok love this fic and the sex on a horse was a big plus
airamy chapter 24 . 8/10/2013
i love it please make a sequel.
Anathema Sicarie Black chapter 24 . 7/20/2013
good story :)
RaidenRiddle chapter 3 . 6/14/2013
Professor Babbling thought ancient runes
Seirei Nightlord05 chapter 12 . 6/8/2013

Not to be rude, but no. 1,that prayer that Kres says is , since that is a verse from the first chapter of the Quran,I'm guessing that Kres is portrayed here as a Muslim with Islam as his religion. well, in Islam, homosexual is extremely forbidden.
While I don't mind homosexual story, please, to portray Kres like this is in essence a mockery to an Abrahamic Religion since it is contradictory with the teachings of Islam...

Overall, your story is nice...Thank you...
KylaNur chapter 12 . 6/7/2013
Can I say something here..i'm really sure there is no gay relation in Islam which u potray Kres in this story..It quite rude when u use freely something that not exist in that religion itself..i think u really need to do some research partially in this topic due to the miss consept here...
Valentina Alexandrea Sparrow chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
erena.nura chapter 9 . 5/2/2013
Remarkable improvement. This story's literature level just tripled. The main character has finally come alive and it only took eight chapters, I forgot to review then. As for your Mpreg, I can't wait to see how you decided to make that work. Hopefully its original. Keep it up!
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