|Reviews for Gabriel|
| ravi chapter 2 . 9/2
amrit means nectar!
| ourzo7 chapter 13 . 8/17
two questions for clarification: shouldn' t treating his psychological problems be one of the first things to do if he's that easily prone to panic attacks? otherwise that's just sending him on the field with a huge bullseye on his back and making him a liability for his platoon. and when you mentioned his stress fracture are we talking hair fractures and is the metal thing on his leg a fixateur extern? if the first part of this question is yes the second half no please watch forest gump even with a metal cast on your legs that isn't literally screwed to your bones fast movement is next to impossiblethat roll he did in dada definitively is)
| ourzo7 chapter 12 . 8/17
Love the idea and the plot development but as a person who grew up on french cheese i can't get over the fact that his nickname is a type of french cheese... i know it's childish but i get the chuckles everytime i read his name. xD
| song min ah chapter 43 . 8/16
this is bloody awesome and you really take your time for each chapie, heh? haha. keep writing and gbu :) hope for fast update :)
| TheHollowClown chapter 43 . 8/13
Second time I've read throught his now. Please update soon!
| scorpioneldar chapter 20 . 7/27
awww that was adorable
i see why you made it so clear this is not a harry hermione fic
that scene alone would probobly have caused endless petiitions in your reviews
very good scene and indeed a thing that can happen between friends
but also somewhat suggestive
the slythiren gang is in trouble now...
| scorpioneldar chapter 18 . 7/27
intersting indeed without harry voldemort had to make new plans for his resurection
i wonder if the plans are better or worse? looking forward to the new developments
| scorpioneldar chapter 7 . 7/27
oh my i love it this was great
im really hoping you did not invent this family because i want to go find them in other media. on the other hand if you did it is fantastic work
| scorpioneldar chapter 6 . 7/27
either one will create great chaos it is just a matter of when not how much
| scorpioneldar chapter 5 . 7/27
hmm odd story you have set up here
when are you skipping to? i presume he will go to hogwarts at some point via summery but you just skipped by 4th year. well.
on to the next chapter
| valerisivokon chapter 11 . 7/27
Someone may have already commented about that, but since the error still persists, I'll mention it anyway:
Anya is a diminutive form of Anna. "Anya Alexandrovna" is an impossible combination. Only the full form of a first name can be used in a combination with a patronymic. Thus, even if Anna's friends, classmates, family etc. would normally call her "Anya" in most everyday situations, in an official situation that calls for the use of her full name she would be called "Anna Alexandrovna", and that is the name that will be used in ALL official documents, such as her birth certificate, passport, medical insurance policy, driver's license, etc., etc., etc. It can NEVER, EVER be "Anya Alexandrovna".
| liz.onia chapter 43 . 7/23
Oh man, the final confrontation is getting close! Excellent chapter, looking forward to the next one!
| scorpioneldar chapter 1 . 7/23
intersting start. is this all OC or do these charecters come from something i really should be watching. i want to know because i love this characterization you have done so fa and if there is a show i will watch it
| Ayemorena chapter 43 . 7/19
| CC chapter 43 . 7/19
looking forward to new chapters :)