An intriguing story. I've enjoyed it. I'm glad that you've gotten Harry/Brie to start to get to know Sirius. I've always thought Canon really had it out for him. I'm also glad Harry/Brie has started to get to know his background. Not sure where you wanted this to go. Seems Harry/Brie will be on a collision course with his uncle. Trading one Dark Lord for another isn't all that wonderful an idea for a people. Though you have made being Dark not as insane or evil as canon. I would guess that your mojo bought plane tickets to a far away place. Ah well. It would be great if you, someday, got inspiration for this again.

Why was this never finished? It's sooo good.

*pokes update date* hey Shika I think this thing is broke….*sad face* I just want to read more please.

the fact that you have implied child abuse is ridiculous, if he was taken from it at the tender age of five none of it would stick to his character and he really wouldn't remember it by the time he attends Hogwarts so there really isn't a reason to involve it.

I come back every couple of years to reread this. It pains me to see it unfinished but it's just so good that I have no choice but to read it again. Thank you for the great story 3

props to you for not using the cringe "his name came out of the goblet and now must reveal himself" plotpoint

please update

I’m so happy Harry won’t be a crybaby pushover. I hate stories that give him extreme ptsd from his family

Thoroughly enjoyed. carefully crafted characters and plot. Would defo read again if more came out.

hermione is extremely annoying like they just met and she's taking a lot of liberties and being extremely rude, nosy, and bossy he's just letting it happen

This makes no sense. He is supposed to be a soldier, no, an officer with high rank and yet he is rendered catatonic by a boggart

Wait... He is a cripple? A warning or notice would've been nice

Yeah... no. He's still having panic attacks and is apparently now a cripple. I wanted to read about a strong mc, not a ptsd case that could not be allowed in combat duty in any modern military.

Why, of why is he rocking the pimp cane? It's too Malfoy to my taste. And pimp. And Cuban nightclub owner

The fact that he thought "kali" Not merlin or God or Jesus cemented it for me that I'll give this a serious try. I hate the little things many times, like a wizard invoking Jesus or God, calling samhain halloween and things like that. Kudos to you for getting the little things right. They bring so much depth into the story