Reviews for First Timers
Frozentaho chapter 1 . 11/13/2006
Pretty cool for something so short.
lauren chapter 1 . 1/31/2006
hehe just so ya know i thought it was ok.
KuraRose chapter 1 . 1/30/2006
O.O *giggles* I'm sure Roy can get Ed to do anything if he really puts his mind to it or mouth or lips or hands. hehe
Aseret Kitsune chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Lol. Love the emotion. Great job!
chicabel chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Wow. I just can't believe there's fanfic about this. I'm impressed and surprised, all at once. suggestion? hmm. Only thing I can think of is: write more about that desk. Your grammar and phrasing are pretty good. I've never written fanfic (although I do write) so it feels awkward to try to suggest things, it seems to come off more like a wish list than a constructive critique.

I'm off to check out your other writing. Laters-a!
kori hime chapter 1 . 12/10/2005
Heheheh. That was great.