Reviews for Floating In Space
yaoilover23 chapter 1 . 2/28/2017
lovely story
Zimcaretaker chapter 1 . 10/10/2016
If only I had that kind of love ;-; Red: You know that we-
Tallest: ...
Purple:O_O ok
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
*sil3nt scr3 m
stellar9ine chapter 1 . 5/6/2014
Very romantic and oh so sexy. Very good fanfictio although I'd like some more drama. Thumbs up.
MoiTrueDreamWriter chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Toxic-0209 chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I loved... Well everything about the story :D and for some odd reason I felt like hit was gonna pop outta nowhere and interrupt their lovey dovey moment xP you should write more! XD
AsianCutie93 chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
I know you said you wanted reviews, but I'm not really sure what to say.

As far as the pacing of oneshots, I thought it was well done and pretty in-character (as in-character as you can get from the show's canon to zadr with sexual content). It is a very hard thing to do but you do it with such ease. While at times there was a couple awkward places, I thought it flowed well. The story was effortless, and that is sadly not an easy task.

The only thing that confused me was that Zim was 17. I don't know if you wrote this before knowing, but Zim, when he first comes to Earth is 16 on Irk/160 in Human years. I guess that you could attribute it to Earth maybe having a weaker gravity than Irk (causing him to grow taller), and that since he spent 6 years on Earth, it was possible for him to turn 17 in Irken years. Still, that's the only thing I found myself stopping from me reading further and pondering how that is possible.

Sorry that I cannot give you a longer review. I don't really have anything to criticize your fanfic on. It's well written, interesting, moved at a good pace, and I hope you continue to write. Hopefully you still liked it even though it was pretty positive and not very constructive. XD
ryoubunny chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
Aww! n.n more! Pwease?
Basic-bookworm chapter 1 . 6/10/2011
cool story. what's w/ the rape though, or did i miss you explanation somewhere-i only skim through A/N's
RofLfaceWTH97 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
my stomach waz like freaking rapping or something. freaking spaz attack of sexyness! i loved it! *adds to favorites* Yay!
lol im not telling u O.o chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
wow i love your perverted mind {much like myself} it was that slight after-taste of humour (also sorry if i misspell i cant spell fuck)
Red eyed Rin chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Oh yeah hot alien / human sex woo just what I needed! ;)
XxchibiholicxX chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
awww! thats awesome that zim would do that for dib
InvaderScarlet chapter 1 . 9/11/2010
Wow I like the part when dib release four times in one night
xStealthxSniperx chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
Okay I know I'm a couple years off...but all I found was what you stated (a little OOCness) and a few spelling mistakes. Other than that, great job! :D
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