Reviews for Moving On
Choas Babe chapter 4 . 11/11/2006
Bastard. I'd have slapped him and told to fuck off and no way in hell.
Owl chapter 4 . 4/16/2006
Delete it? You wouldn't! Update! (please.)
TrunksgirlBlaze27 chapter 4 . 2/6/2006
Love it still! LOL! I haven't updated in forever, so don't feel bad, school and homework can be a pain in the $$, i will definitely say that...anyway update ASAP so we can read more of the fic, PLEASE! Thanks!
jaklover123 chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
you have ten more days till V-day dear. It was a good chapter though! All good things come to those who wait! :nodnod: Now, we must mourn for Roxie. I hates being grounded too, but I get grounded from all electronics. T_T my life is my electronics...especially the computer and ps2.
M-Angel 05 chapter 4 . 2/4/2006
I liked that chapter a lot...Update faster if possible...


TrunksgirlBlaze27 chapter 3 . 1/3/2006
Love these chapters! Update soon!
M-Angel 05 chapter 3 . 1/2/2006
That was good, but was still too short compared to your other stories..._

jaklover123 chapter 3 . 1/2/2006
wait, mog, as in, "JakII "Jak's my hero." mog?

nad mr. creepy is well...creepy...sorta. XP and flash better not die! he's only 12! .
Authraw chapter 2 . 12/29/2005
Wow! This was an excellent chapter!

I loved the action with Bo and Flash-that was probably my favorite part of the chapter-great job! Keep going! I can't wait for the next chapter! :D

M-Angel 05 chapter 2 . 12/26/2005
Me like chapter...You must write more...

Serena: Forgive her...She's on a suagr low...

Author: Me feeling stupid...Please update soon..

P.S. I just updated my story Long Lost Love...Here's a preview of it...

The Chapter everybody's been waiting for...The wedding is finally here...Jak and Keira are getting married...Jak is excited, Keira's nervous, Daxter is hopeful, and what's this, a surprised guess has appeared. Who could it be? Also somebody wants Jak Mar dead, but who? Read and find out...
jaklover123 chapter 2 . 12/26/2005
great chapter! I hope flash and bo's plan work out. and i really hope tuya won't be what probably everyone thinks she is. ANd, i'm gonna take a wild guess and say that the mystery guys want merlander. _; well, can't wait for next chapter.
Aimed mischief chapter 2 . 12/25/2005
Hey! This just keeps getting better and better! Keep it up and have fun!

Ps: Who was that guy Marek was supposed to capture? Merlander or Jak?

TrunksgirlBlaze27 chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Its great already!This sequel is gonna be awsome! Update soon! I so want to read more!
Authraw chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Yay! An excellent start for the story! There are some great possibilities lying just beneath the surface here-Keep it up! :D

M-Angel 05 chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Oh, Thank-you thank-you for finally doing the sequel...I really enjoyed this chapter...

However you had a misspelled word...“Tiered?”..It should be "Tired?"...Just thought you should know..

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