Reviews for Relativity
JMK758 chapter 1 . 1/3/2006
A delightful view of the Temporal forces, with some imaginative techs. Pleasant all around.
Rigil Kent chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Very interesting start. Looking forward to the next chapter.
GallyGee chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
Ha! Good fix! I knew Daniels had to exist for a reason :-)

I love the approach of this and the understated final paragraph, which tells us all we need to know.
firebirdgirl chapter 1 . 12/11/2005
Can't wait to see where you take this, it's a great beginning! Happy writing!