Reviews for Twenty Red Balloons
Bj-Lydia chapter 1 . 9/6/2011
Awww so cute! I love this couple! Awsome job :D
Swamp Rat's Chere chapter 1 . 3/2/2006
ya are inta really unusual pairins ain'tcha sugah? oh, darn here come da tears, dang dis is so cute, an fluffy, ah love fluff, at least he didn't get down on one knee, dat is so overrated. nice job
The Scarlet One chapter 1 . 12/30/2005
that was cute. I liked it.
PlasmaMarionette chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
I loved the idea. It was so original to bits. The only thing I was pretty peeved at was at the

you used to separate the scenes.

The ending was very sweet and fluffy, and although I only exclusively do slash, I did enjoy reading this.
Scarlet Child chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
That was cute what Lance did for the little girl, but i thought he was doing it for Kitty, not Wanda
Wingless Cherub chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
I'm trying to picture this, and I simply can't. Not the pairings, Lance and Wanda seem great together. But Tabitha and Wanda connected at the hip? The Brotherhood actually working together, and to help Lance (the total outcast) think of a present for a girl, especially Wanda? I just can't see it. Maybe this takes place much later on though, like in their late twenties-that I could understand.. maybe. I like the idea, though; Lance and Wanda getting together. Maybe add some angst, mix in some drama, with just a pinch of tragedy-then some more chapters-...But I like this. I like that you're not afraid to manipulate the characters differently. The rest is just my idea of creative criticism (I'm really not trying to hurt anyone's feelings here).