|Reviews for To Become A Queen|
| Daughter of the North chapter 5 . 11/24/2013
While I am not a fan of the way you characterized Lothíriel (her personality is simply the opposite of mine in the wrong way), I read these stories for her brothers. You write them in such a fun, snappy way, complete with Joss-esqu dialogue and strong character developement. You can feel the history radiating between the three, and the complete differences between the younger two's ways of expressing love is marvelous. I absolutely LOVE how they verbally spar with their elder brother. I love them. I love them. I'd read a story just about them. You managed to make minor-Tolkein characters without copy-paste characteristics; well done!
| Light on the Horizon chapter 7 . 1/14/2013
Loved this! :-)
| Kiiimberly chapter 4 . 6/20/2012
"Will you do me a favour?" Éomer inquired politely.
"If it does not take too much trouble."
"Fall onto your sword."
Eomer is hilarious :) Amrothos has the worst timing ever! I wanted to hear what Eomer was going to say next.
| Kiiimberly chapter 2 . 6/20/2012
"If you have been waiting for me, you could have had said a word in all those months."
| Kiiimberly chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
"I have been waiting for you."
So cute :) I think I just fell in love with your Eomer.
| The Huntress of the Moon chapter 1 . 4/26/2012
Truly amazing! I've read all of your stories at least three times, an they are hands-down my favorite E/L stories.
When are your other stories going to be out? I saw you had plans on your profile but didn't set a time.
Also, is Unexpected finished? It seems a strange place to end it.
Huntress of the Moon
| b5delenn chapter 7 . 4/14/2012
Your stories are simply amazing. The conversation about the turtles vary so funny! And I really like Amrothos as you portray him.
| Nogal chapter 7 . 12/1/2011
I love this story, I laughed, I got exasperated, I got excited.
Eomer is one of my favourites characters in LOTHR and enjoyed a lot reading one piece of his life. He, so strong, but so sweet. It's perfect to compare him with a cat and a lion. That's why I liked a lot to read the last chapter from his point of view.
Only two bad points that somebody else already commented: the absence of Eowyn and Faramir (I'd have like a little explanation: her pregnancy, for example), and the meet with the fellowship. I'm surprised that Lothiriel didn't meet them before, in Minas Tirith, in the House of Healers, in the coronation of Eomer... But it's your point of view and it's ok for me :-)
Finally, with embarrasment I have to regognize I lost the innuendo with the marigolds, and even Lothiriel understand it! :-( But I caught the others! :-P Maybe because English isn't my native language. I felt a little frustrated.
Anyway, congratulations on such a deligthful and funny fic!
| Bellicose chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
I think one of the many, many reasons why I love your version of the story so much is that you're one of very few who have Thiri's brothers not super bff with Eomer right away, which seems much more likely to me. And speaking of those three, Erchirion and Amrothos are so frickin adorable. Elphir... meh. I can't even remember how many times I've read your series and yet I can still sit here and re-read and be on the edge of my seat waiting to read more.
| karol89 chapter 3 . 10/11/2011
i love tis series but i have to say i find this chapter rather hard to melt simply because i am a LOTR fan and find in hard to believe that aragorn who has been brought up and taught by Elrond, the greates healer of them all and has decades of experience on his hand when it comes to healing would just stand and watch while lothiriel did all the work.
why would he wait for lothrile to know the seriousness of the injury and how to proceed?
and this seem to occure through out the story where aragorn seem to wait around for lothoriel to help people.
then again it may be essential to the story. but still...
other than that great job.
| quaff chapter 7 . 5/20/2011
You are such an awesome writer. Thank you for writing this.
| Certh chapter 7 . 2/2/2011
I am at a loss for words to describe how beautifully written every bit of this story is.
| Delightful chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
Ahh Amrothos... You know, I love him. Soooo cool.
| Lady-Finwe chapter 7 . 3/25/2009
wow love the series so far hope theres more to come :) peace
| Liz chapter 7 . 9/10/2008
Oh wow! I can't tell you how much I love your stories! I really enjoy Eomer/Lothiriel stories, and I truly just love the way you write the characters. There's really nothing I can think of that can be improved, either. Thank you for taking the time to read this and for sharing your love of writing with us. Can't wait for the next!