Reviews for The Mountain
HeavenShallBurn chapter 1 . 12/13/2006
Only a master author could have written this. Well done.
Swift chapter 1 . 5/17/2006
Wow, this is good. I like how you had Sango run immediately to the aid of the village, recklessly, and realize that it was a stupid thing to do but did it anyways. I think that it really captures her character. Her pride and lack of fear in the end was admirable, and I could see how (if this was canon) this event could have made her the strong warrior that she is. Great work!
Inudaughter chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
nicely written
xXxjustagrlxXx chapter 1 . 2/10/2006
Please don't end the story of Sesshy and Sango.
Keke Koorime chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
YEAH! good story!
OneInuLuver chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
I thought that this story was just so masterfully written...it made me able to almost see the images before my eyes...Bravo,and thank you!
misikoblossom chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
I was pleasantly suprised with your fic. Good job on keeping Sango and Sesshomaru in character.

I was a little disappointed that this was not a romance fic, but to keep the "in characterness" true, I suppose that it is possible.

Overall, I enjoyed your fic very much. Hmm..the little girl being saved? It sounds like Rin, only...you've added Sango into the part. Good job on incorporating that subtly into the fic ]. I was really surprised, when I suddenly realized what was what!

I'm looking forwards to your future fics... Good job.
The-world-needs-peace chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
That...was...COOL! That was an awesome story! Totally keeping Sesshomaru and Sango in character. This was really well written, only a few spelling typos. Kepp writing! You've got talent!
Geraldine Hake chapter 1 . 12/12/2005
That was a truly wonderful one-shot...I just wish it could be longer, or we could see what he was thinking when he met her. But I understand that that wasn't meant to be a love story, no matter how much I'd like it to be. I think that you should write more about this couple, and that you could bring them together in a very reasonable way. Well think about it, this is just the crazy musings of a lovestruck girl.