Reviews for Straw Hat Moon
Althea Sirius chapter 12 . 9/19
There was a lot less description.
A tip would be that since it's a crossover of two plots, you have to change things up. The Sailor Moon characters are in a new enviornment, they would have different yet similar likes and dislikes compared to their original series. Give some them different interests and love interests.
Althea Sirius chapter 6 . 9/19
Good chapter, could use some polish.
Althea Sirius chapter 3 . 9/17
Instead of making transformations last a minute, make it instantanious. It doesn't make that much sense to have it last so long.
Althea Sirius chapter 2 . 9/17
I get the feeling that the shipping of Mamoru and Usagi isn't changing.
It would've been cute if she was shipped with someone else.
Leafeon12 chapter 12 . 6/30
Great chapter can't wait until your next one! :D
Tensa-Zangetsu102 chapter 7 . 1/19
You used the 4kids version name of Luffy's Gum Gum Gattling!
Althea Sirius chapter 1 . 8/21/2016
Great job! _
rinnegan18 chapter 11 . 9/11/2015
nice chapter
Cure Leo AKA AshK1980 chapter 11 . 9/10/2015
Good work! This is a very good story so far! This update was well worth the wait!
Radio Driver chapter 10 . 8/22/2014
Good goin, Emma. Keep on keepin on.
Cure Leo AKA AshK1980 chapter 10 . 8/16/2014
Great work on this awesome update as always! Keep up the great work!
Sir Thames chapter 10 . 8/16/2014
Nice writing, love. Carry on.
rinnegan18 chapter 10 . 8/15/2014
good chapter
rinnegan18 chapter 9 . 6/29/2014
good story,please continue
Idea chapter 9 . 5/17/2014
If you ever continue this you should introduce Mako with Franky as a part of the Franky family
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