|Reviews for MOLAD: Destiny's Edge|
| Sora Tayuya chapter 6 . 7/8/2010
The rare thing about a battle like this is that it is (obviously) between best friends. The only reason they are fighting is because of who they are fated to be, it actually is not personal at all. I have only before seen one other fight like this, and it was not a fanfiction. I cannot remember the exact details, but this is perfect. It is in its full glory; you captured their totally-fine-with-trying-to-kill-my-best-friend-no-big-deal attitudes well.
Normally (99%), the evil one is angry at the good person, or despises them or something (ex: Riku and Sora’s previous to-the-death matches in this same spot). However, rarely (1%) do each fighter actually care about the other. A close example of this is when Xion faced Axel for the last time in front of the old mansion in Twilight Town, but that didn’t truly catch the emotional workings between each person, so it is not a very good example. It still shows the basic idea though, friends fighting friends, comrade to comrade.
They try to act more like having to destroy the other is a…duty of sorts. Though, whichever boy wins will have a big problem. If Riku destroys Sora (or just defeats him), then he has to go back and tell everybody the news, which won’t have a very good reception. If Sora won, then he would actually have to leave everyone and probably accept his fate as the Master of All Evil. Of course, so many other things could happen…
…as not quite proven yet here.
All in all, this was an amazing chapter. I like your writing style, I’m adding this to my favorite stories list, and I’m reading the sequel. Congrats.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 5 . 7/8/2010
This chapter made me sad, because it seems a bit like Sora is allowing fate to work its course by deciding to tell Riku. At least he didn't outright attack him or anything. An even worse case scenario would have been if another evil villian who worked with the darkness were to tell everyone. So I suppose that Sora had to be the one to tell them...but news like this...well, how Would one go about telling his friends and loved ones that he is the supposed Master of All Evil?
...not a pretty picture.
But you portrayed it very nicely. I am eager to see what happens next chapter, and if Riku really will attack his best friend. If Riku does attack Sora, how will he take it? And if not...then will something (or someone) else come in at Riku's moment of hesitation and do something durastic? ...well, I'll go and read it Right Now...
| Sora Tayuya chapter 4 . 7/8/2010
I like the fun, normal interactions that Sora continues to do. Playing tag with Peter competetively, exploring the worlds, and hanging out with his friends. Even though he is just trying to outrun the inevitable, that is fine because you are working the plot so nice and smoothly.
Hook not knowing was very true to his character as well; he may be a rather good evil villian, but he has always been a bit, well, behind the times.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 3 . 7/8/2010
Well...Sora certainly does have an interesting problem there. Even his endless optimism is a little less endless here.
You are handling the scenes well, and the character's actions are very life-like and thorough. I am hopeful for a good revealing scene too, when one of the people reveals to his friend's that Sora is the Master of Darkness. I hope it goes over well.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 2 . 7/8/2010
I must say...
...I am VERY impressed. Not only has your writing style continued, but the plot is progressing at a good pace, the storyline is engaging and interesting, and there is little to no OOC-ness that I can tell of right at the moment.
It really is a predicament that Sora is in, isn't he? He is maintaining his natural behaviors by staying positive though. Axel too is seemingly very in-character. His part is being played quite nicely.
Yes, this is AU, but not entire universe-switching that AU so commonly is.
Your writing style is very professional. It is a pleasure to read a story with an exceptional plot as this. I expect great things from this.
| Sora Tayuya chapter 1 . 7/8/2010
Hm...unsure of how this story will go, but it is completed, with a sequel, so it must be interesting. Plus, this opening is very ironic. I will see until the next chapter if you can maintain this writing style.
So far though, it actually sounds rather good, contrary to what it initially seemed.
| arcnologia chapter 6 . 6/24/2008
Awesome! I'm going to read the next one right now!
| xXx Fox Trot xXx chapter 6 . 5/26/2006
This whole story was abosolutly amazing. I was tensed up and ready for anything ever since they entered Hollow Bastion. I havn't read a Kingdom Hearts story this well... well, EVER! The plot was unique and inviting, and the overall comencment of it was enthralling. I am astounded at your talents and envious at the same time. I look forward to it's sequal! _
YOUR NEWEST DEVOTED FAN WHO WILL BUY YOUR FIRST BOOK!
| Shiznap chapter 6 . 2/8/2006
WHOA. I MISSED VIOLENCE. AND SORA BEING ... HIMSELF. D
| DraconicPinions chapter 6 . 1/29/2006
*on knees* PLEASE ! Start the story! I'm begging you!
| DraconicPinions chapter 5 . 1/26/2006
YOUR EVIL! Leaving us hanging like that? Shame! update soon though :)
| DraconicPinions chapter 4 . 1/26/2006
Yay! You updated! Nice chapter! Ithink this story is very original! Oh Yeah, there is this stoy by Rem-Chan thats really good! think you could check it out?
| DraconicPinions chapter 3 . 1/21/2006
Oh yeah! Update soon! Its getting good!
| DraconicPinions chapter 1 . 1/19/2006
Omg! Update son! I can't wait for the next chapters. Hopefully you won't leave us hanging likeother authors/esses
| Shiznap chapter 2 . 1/14/2006
"Come to the darkside, Sora. We have cookies." xD *ahem* Sorry WM, couldn't resist. Ah, same ole' lovable MOLAD.
xD Awesome updart.