Reviews for Not In a Million Years
Kimnd chapter 1 . 2/27
Wow, that was really interesting! Especially because of the emphasis Ptolomy's Gate does put on Bartimeaus's accuracy at depicting Ptolomy. I like your take!
C'sMelody chapter 1 . 12/5/2014
Jesus, this is so awesome!
I think you provided more insight on Ptolemy and Bartimaeus relationship than Stroud ever has, so kudos to you. I can feel Ptolemy here, like he's a full-fledged character. Also, I loved their small bickering, it was different from what you usually see out there.
Great job!
Me chapter 1 . 6/6/2014
It's really good! Bartemaeus...
Rydd Rider chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
I liked the ending... "Is that so?"

I thought you did a pretty good job with their relationship, even if you hadn't read all of Ptolemy's Gate when you wrote this. _
Lucan chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Very good. Made me laugh, think, and feel sad all at once.
Anoymous chapter 1 . 3/9/2008
Super, Super, awsome... poor bartimaeus. He seems- no, does miss Ptolemy...Nathaniel doesnt seem to be helping.

-People who say that anythings possible havent tried to slam a revolving door.
ArtyHollyFreak chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
Amazing! Surprisingly, Stroud's version involved assasins, too. I've never liked slash much, but the Barty/Ptolemy is just subtle enough to love. Bravo/Brava!
Lady of the Shire chapter 1 . 3/8/2007

Lady: Even though you didn't read the next book it was still cool! Yea!
Senketsu 32 chapter 1 . 1/27/2007
Exquisite... Just -exquisite... There is no other word for this. It makes me feel a bit sad, yet surprisingly refreshed. It was a great, brilliant work.

I find a bit hard to believe you haven't seen the third book, since your description of Ptolemy is so... believable, and accurate.

What I think about this is really hard to put in words... It makes me feel (a bit hard to express)... alot.

And... you got it. Whatever 'it' was. I'm not sure myself...

Well, I just love it. Really.
LandUnderWave chapter 1 . 12/23/2006
What a wonderful story. The ending makes me sad for some reason, not sure why though. *stares out her window into the boring sunlight*

Mutant Goldfish chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
Wow. This is really good. I love how Bartimaeus corrects himself with the "my- his-" thing. For not having read Ptolemy's Gate, you got a startlingly accuarte scope on Ptolemy's personality. Well done.
XxBlackChaosxX chapter 1 . 6/29/2006
This has to be the best story I've read all day. I could really SEE Ptolemy, not just FEEL him. You know? I'm sure you don't. Nobody does. Oh well. Anyway, good story. Another one of those great kinds that make me think. Thanks for the thoughts.
ricco-the-penguin chapter 1 . 6/4/2006
*squee* great job. : D I love the slashiness...
silver sliver chapter 1 . 5/12/2006
Very good. Loved how- hm... well, loved the technique of your writing, its very good. _ oh, thanx for reviewing my barty fic, (I can't, won't , try to spell, "collu-collse-" *sighs* XP) you gave me a GREAT idea, thank you very much! _ awesome, loved how he was practicing his form, lol, nail biter, :P,

Hope you continue to write Bartimaeus fics! Yours are very good! _
Butterflywing chapter 1 . 2/23/2006
I liked this story... I haven't read the third book either, so...
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