|Reviews for Odyessy Summery|
| GUESTICLES chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
1) Hard to read
2) Lots of spelling errors. Very distracting
3) Your grammar is bad and you should feel bad.
4) Where is your plot?
5) No character development
6) too many characters making random appearances with little to no explanation.
7) PARAGRAPHS, COMMAS, AND SPACES ARE YOUR FRIENDS
8) very much a tl;dr type fic.
9) wouldn't even call this a fic. Just random words mushed together in an unhappy, drunken orgy.
| Untaintedchild chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
Never had time to read the whole thing, good though!
| Rose Is Rose chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
more! more! MORE! _