Reviews for Masters Of Horror
Angie chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Oh, definitely keep going! I like how you have more Munch and Fin in this story! And Having the character Sam is genius! Please please please keep going!
Sadie555 chapter 1 . 12/22/2005
please, do keep going. I will help you write better though. First, the detectives always go to the crime scene before they send the body to autopsy, so that they can begin at the begining. They don't get the case after there's already been an autopsy.

Another tip I would give you is to maybe indent when you change your scenes from the detectives to the kids. Makes it easier to read.

Last, I find it funny that the warner (though I though it was called a correner, and I don't think that Warner is her actual name) would say that the suspects "accedently killed her".

But I'm just trying to help, I hope you do continue, because the story is great. Good luck!
JagSister chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Pretty good so far, but of course its just the first chapter and i can't really judge the whole story
fasdfawet chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
The summary for this made me think of a school orgy.

Blech.
SerenaFelicity chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
update soon. I enjoyed this first chapter.
aserene chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
sick...but kinda of interesting...please update soon!
AntisocialButterfly13 chapter 1 . 12/13/2005
I like it, it's really good! Please update soon!