|Reviews for Why?|
| The Critic's Realm chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
So sad... :'(
| SecretMarial chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
I want a sequel...
| Ciege chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
It's really not as bad as you make out, there's alot of weird things about pokemon, especially the games, for example playing crystal, first encounter with lance, his whole team got annihilated by fluffy's (my furret) ice punch...which leads to the question how did a a ferret learn to punch wiht an ice augmented fist, as well as how do you forget how to growl?...
Trainer:"furret use growl!"
...but it's still fun, I haven't been oh here for a while. I'm so glad you're continuing For whom the wind blows, i couldn't find it for a while and thought you'd taken it down or something, which would have been depressing...
| Holly of the Night chapter 1 . 7/14/2010
Left to die? What the hell kind of battle did they have? An illegal one? 0_0
I can see Pikachu and Ash come along and heal Sparks, and he'd feel happy again 3
But this story was nice, very nice... and very sweet too
Aw, poor Sparks though /
| XbuttonsX chapter 1 . 6/6/2008
omg. Thats so sad! poor Sparky. T.T I feel bad now. :(
| Name chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
'that was good'
| Tomboy 601 chapter 1 . 2/18/2007
Sad. Good story.
| Wolf Kid chapter 1 . 2/9/2007
that was sad!
| Maddeningly Mad chapter 1 . 11/11/2006
Aw...that was sad...but good...
| MercuryMoon chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
Aw man.. this is so sad.. I remember reading this ages ago, but I never quite got to review it.
| DarkDragonGuardian chapter 1 . 7/8/2006
Nu!;_; Poor Pikachu!X[ What will happen to him next?Never thought of a POV for a pokemon before so I think that was pretty good.- Your style of writting is pretty to see more of your work.
| pixie paramount chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
Yes, I love this. I've been in and out of Pokemon for years but, I must say, recently its sparked back again. Jesus, I did adore this fic; it is one of a kind. The thing is: I've read a lot of a fanfics. I mean, *a lot* of fics. But I have never read a Pokemon fic like this; it really is one of a kind. God, I do adore it. Your writing is emotive, your characterization is gradual and *real*. Love it. Jus, love it.
[ Oh, and you *so* should write Kannazuki no Miko fic, the section needs your talent. ]
- Pixie Paramount
| funkmasterjo chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
That was quite sad, but it raises an important point. The dark side of a children's TV show is never pretty, but we must'nt run away from reality.
| Silver Sailor Ganymede chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
This was really well written; I don't think I've read a fic that deals with this subject before. Fantastic work, especially for a first fic. Keep it up.
| Dannichu chapter 1 . 3/30/2006
I really love fics that explore parts of the Pokémon World that the games don't go into, and this was just excellent, especially if it's your first. You have great talent for this kind of thing, and it'd be great to see more stuff from you. Bonus points for having a Pikachu as the subject