I hope Harry tells the whole Order to fuck off.

Right... you better not try and redeam Dumbledore after this... What he did was fucking terrible and unforgivable.

So sorry that it's not been updated in forever, this is a pretty interesting story. But as for the contacts why not just paint them, like they do muggle eye replacements, OR get a proper muggle eye replacement and put the charms on it. They don't have to use a magical eye. If she can charm a contact lens why can't she charm a glass sphere?

Good story

More please

you really need to finish this story!

Oh no! The ultimate cliffie? Cliffies are good bit not at the end of a story!

Not the best written story from a technical standpoint but you make tears come to my eyes in almost every chapter. Well done!

Cliffies are good!

Hermione with a sister, never read one like that. I guess she’s not magical.

This was a tremendous story that deserved completion. That premise was fresh, the approach was novel and the storyline offered so much more than canon repeated ad nauseum.
In the first chapters it seemed this was a first time author that got schooled by someone to finally not add in the authors notes and comments at the end of each chapter. Lesson learned.
If continued in this quality, it would have been a Favorite.

I know this hasn’t been updated for like 14 years not even sure if you’re still seeing reviews but on the off chance you are I adore this fic the premise and writing is great thank you for sharing with us even if life or the muse never allowed you to finish it

It's been well over a decade since you posted. I hope all is well and that you soon find your muse.
This is a fantastic story - well woven and intriguing. there are so many loose ends that I would love to see added to and tied off in this tapestry you've started. I hope that after whatever trials that 'real life' has thrown at you that you can come back or at least write a summation of what you wanted. It's wonderful - please come back!

I wonder why Hermione or Harry don't think about Dobby? He could actually be of help packing up the Granger's house or delivering Mooney to his long lost friends. He also could get copies of the Prophet so that they know what is going on. I also wonder why the Potters never contacted Mooney.

Wow. Loved this. Sure wish it hadn’t been abandoned. Will add it to my follow list, but given the amount of time that has passed, I won’t be especially optimistic.