|Reviews for Bleak Bonds|
| Forsaken Elf chapter 1 . 4/14/2006
Poor Tumnus *heart*! You did a very good job- and I have that "author-hates-own-writing" disease as well x_x it sucks. But really, good story!
| spacedout86 chapter 1 . 1/4/2006
Aw, poor Tumnus :(. FYI the story was NOT pitiful at all! It is simply beautiful! And sad. But really awesome! I sure want more!
| Pickle chapter 1 . 1/2/2006
That was fantabulous. Absolutely. Poor dear Tumnus. *huggles Mr. Tumnus*
| Anastasia Who chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
Aw... I loved this. I love Mr. Tumnus. He is so cool. The friendship between Tumnus and Lucy is so sweet and I love the way you potrayed it here. This was very good. I can imagine this happening. Very well done. Thanks for writing
| Rendia chapter 1 . 12/21/2005
Oh, don't hate it, it's cute! This makes me want to see the movie even more! I never gave too much thought about what happened to Mr. Tumnus before the witch froze him. I just figured she was so mad that she froze him as soon as the wolves brought him back. This really makes much more sense though.
| Elizabeth chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Yay, I love it! FINALLY, another Tumnus fan! I'd always liked him as a character, but I loved him in the new movie, and I love this story, even if you don't. Write more!
P.S. Poor Tumnus. :( I just saw the movie again.
| almostinsane chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
This is a great story!
| elfchicks chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
That was very, very good. I thought that part of the movie was so sad. Great job of capturing the moment.
| buttoned.up chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
That was such a beautiful story.
I seriously thought I was the only one who wanted Lucky and Tumnus to be together.
Your writing is very descriptive,
It paints such a detailed picture of what's going on in his mind.
| Steel Plated Bambi chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
That wasn't pitiful! It was wonderful! The first part made me feel sad. Oh, my poor Tumnus. I cried all the way through that part of the movie. I really wanted to give him a hug.
No mechanical errors that I can see. Very well written!
| Stephantom chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Very well-written and moving. As everyone else said, I want to give Tumnus a big huge right about now. :)
One thing you forgot from the movie was how Tumnus encouraged Edmund not to reveal where the others were, barging in with, "He's a stranger here, he can't be expected to know anything," and giving a meaningful look to Ed. That seemed to be what really got the witch pissed at him, and in retalliation she told him what Ed did.
It's ok that you left it out, of course. I just thought it was a nice, noble moment for him.
I really liked the end actually. I loved the whole piece.
| Sanaryelle chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Aw, poor Tumnus!
I haven't seen the movie eyt, but this just makes me want to go see it now! I love the moment of contact between Tumnus and Edmund. Well done!
| Silver Wolf696 chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
I loved your story, it had a great portrayal of Tumnus and I think he and Lucy were really cute in the movie.
| JacksTortugaLass chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Wow. This is amazing. I just love it. And it's not a pititful ending or story! Both are just so powerful! I just love it...sorry I can't be anymore explanatory, I'm just in awe...
| Bronzeiris chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Wonderful - A great description of my favorite character. Bravo!