This fic is awesome, Great visualization- I can practically see the entire scene in my head. Poor Logan.

One part that confused me though- Veronica was with Logan most of the Summer and got back together with Duncan near the end- she said it was a few weeks in between dumping and dating, but you put "Ever since her dad pinned him against the wall 4 months ago" so I'm thinking how long is their summer? Lol?

Thanks for the read.

Azer

nice work!

this is a good fic, i love it, sad though, i'm torn, i don't know whether i like Duncan or Logan with veronica better

Lisa

Aww...! Very well-written and in-char, and etc... *sniff*

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so sad!

I LOVE IT

Great story, very realistic...very awesome for a first timer...keep up the good work

I like this. And I know I should leave a more substantial review, but I can't think of anything else to say.