|Reviews for Ancient Ways, Ancient Evils|
| Kat chapter 20 . 10/7/2013
I'm so lost and I'm barely past 14. -_-#
WTF IS THE PLOT ANYWAY!?
| You thief chapter 54 . 10/6/2013
Sonic quest for power copycat.
'Whats this? Another level?' - Sigma
That warp thing where four of them fire chaos energy at him
| FelineGal chapter 52 . 6/17/2013
i'll save you!*grabs the Blades of Exile from out of nowhere and charges at Akuma* PREPARE TO BE DICED LIKE A TOMATO AND ROASTED LIKE A KABOB AT THE SAME TIME!
Heather: Save some of his blood for me!*charges at Akuma as well*
Willow: this may get ugly*pushes the characters away*
Jenny: *casually watches from afar*
Johnny: *eats popcorn*
| FelineGal chapter 45 . 6/16/2013
i like KH too!... but i only have the first game.. and i can't beat it... KeyBlade Fight!*pulls a KeyBlade out of nowhere* En-Garde! :3
Jenny: This should be good*eats popcorn*
Heather: I agree*drinks some wine*
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
... Dude, WAY too fast. For one thing, Shadow would never act that way if this was the first time he saw Amy in three years, no matter how he felt. Way OOC for him. I'm not sure about Amy, but I don't think she would give up on her life long crush that easily either.
| Sonicon50 chapter 47 . 8/2/2012
Though this is a great story, what did Deviln name Sonic? I seriously want to know.
| fang chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
GWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! SHADOWS FACE LOOKS HILARIOUS! HE SORTA REMINDS ME OF ADOLF HITLER (NO OFFENCE TO ANYONE WHO HATES HIM, I HATE HIM TOO, THATS WHY I LIKE TO MAKE FUN OF HIM) I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT PICTURE WHEN I CLICKED YOR NAME! GWAAHAAHHHHAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAH!
| Hazlov2004 chapter 1 . 2/7/2012
| Sensitive girl chapter 30 . 1/8/2011
I love how you made the parasite all like "if i describe him to you, you will either underestimate him or overestimate him". I think i reviewed this story, but if I hadn't this was a very good story. It will go on my favorites and this si my second time reading it.
| KingCouch chapter 61 . 11/14/2010
Aww, it's over? Shucks!
This is, honestly, the greatest fanfic I have ever read. Really. The plot was incredible, and I am excited to read the Reimagined version and I hope that you will continue it.
Anyways, I liked how all of the pots in the story, in the end, were all tied together at the end. But, I have an odd feeling that something is missing from one of the minor characters... if I think of it, I'll tell you... or maybe I'm just tired right now.
I wish I could write stories as great as this. " Although, for Reimagined, I would drop some of the OCs, because I did get a little confusing at some points in the story.
You have amazing talent, and you should definetly become a real author. I'd be a fan. :)
Hmm... I do have a little advice for Reimagined. It's your fight scenes, some seem a little short. But I know it's difficult to find the balance in a fight scene between to short and rushed, and too long and boring.
Well, not much more to say, other than to keep on writing!
| KingCouch chapter 41 . 11/9/2010
Still readin', still a little confused by some of the chatracters, and still likin' the story a lot!
Umm, this is embarrassing, but what's the meteor parasite again? "
Also, about Tails' physics explanation and all, I can't justify this 100%, but I thought it was that the object will remain in motion in a vacuum (not the cleaning thingy hehe, like a space vacuum), but very slowly. Kind of like acceleration by free falling, where at one point you can't fall any faster, except the opposite where you can't move any slower.
Please tell me if I'm wrong about this though.
I checked out some of the fanart for this story, mainly, umm, what's the name? EbonyScarlette, I think. I really like it and to be honest, it had helped me understand the story some more.
Anyways, I'll just generalize my review right now, cuz Im tired. XD wow everything is funny when you're tired...
Still like the story a ton, believe me, but it kind of feels like it's lost a little of it's shapow. Shapow is my term that I just invented for suspense. Anyways, one thing that I don't really like is how you introduce more villians this late in the story. The names not in my head right now, but the one guy who Sonic embarrassed at that party thing... who vowed revenge on Sonic? I thought it was kind of pointless to add him, because it is so late, and most of the villians are purely badass bad, this one, just kind of a flat character. Still a great story, believe me, I still love it. Can't wait to read the Reimagined version, because I suspect that reading this story twice will definately clear up things. Kind of like the Matrix, it's one hell of a movie, but the first time you watch it you don't realy get it.
| KingCouch chapter 14 . 11/7/2010
Let me just say, that so far, this is the best fanfic I have ever read. A real page turner... err, chapter scroller downer and keep reading the story..., I'm suspecting I'll be up late reading this.
Umm, like you wrote about starting with the bad and ending with the good, said the sensei, let's start the review with some cons.
Number One is, I'm kind of overwhelmed by the amount of characters in the story. It's hard to remember some of the names... like, I know for a fact two out of three evil beings you described at the beginning at the museum, Ragozine and Black Doom, but the other one, I'm having a hard time knowing. Is it Nazo? Or is it another person?
Also, Tails' (or, Milos') trio, Im having a hard time understanding who exactly they are.
Nazo is mainly who confuses me. I think he is the ultimate antagonist of the story and Milos' "ruler", but the fast amounts of characters bugs me.
Second is just that Tahra is kind of a Mary Sue. She broke from the spell. She is Sonic's love interest...
Also, the Blood Rose Dragon has kind of Ben neglected since her first appearence... that's it for cons.
Pros! The plot is AWESOME, I adore Shadamy, I love how you made Amy actually have a past. This story reminds me of the Matrix, kind of. This story should be made into a movie, for sure. Or, at least a flash.
Well, Imma keep readin'!
| TheDaxam chapter 12 . 6/14/2010
Thinking about what you said at the beginning of chapter 12, I've recently been getting into flash but I've had nothing to motivate me. This might be helpful for me if you would like, I could maybe make a test of the first chapter for you to check.
| Kotego chapter 13 . 12/15/2009
Well, since reading the first chapter I've found this to be a very interesting story and can't wait to read more Despite small errors here or there, this story is nearly free of mistakes, which is also good compared to others that I've read.
I'd be willing to do some fanart anyway, I guess *shrug* If you want to make a request of that, check me out on DeviantArt - its the same username.
| Imagination Publications chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Great! Just a great hit. I'm not a fan on ShadxAmy parts, but it's all good. I still have to read the remixed version. Keep doing what you're doing