|Reviews for Awakenings|
| SumCheeze chapter 9 . 1/14
Wow, I can't really describe how happy I am now after reading this fic. There are quite a few stories out there that present the readers with a plot where Hinamori is in a coma for a while and how Tōshirō tries to come around to his feelings etc. Sadly many of them are left unfinished to this day, so I think you can imagine my joy when I found out that this fic is not one of them. I can also cross my heart and say that "Awakenings" is by far to me the most emotional, touching, and well written fic compared to any other same kind of Hitsuhina story out there I have read. There is so much more that I thoroughly enjoyed about it including your writing style and use of language but unfortunately I have run out of words. So all in all thank you and your betas for your hard work and this amazing storySorry for ranting xD Will definitely check out your other stories too. See ya!
| BorealisSpiral chapter 9 . 8/31/2017
Whoops! The review was sent to the wrong chapter... Oh well.
Sitll love your fic :P
| BorealisSpiral chapter 6 . 8/31/2017
This fic is just amazing. I loved it so much! *u*
I’m more of a ghost-reader kind of person, but I’ve been wanting to be more active around here, and what better place to start with than my OTP, right?
I’ve read your work before. Actually, a fic named “His” was the first one of yours that I read and I loved it a lot (still have to review it). But after a while of not being around here, I ended up with this one and I just needed to tell you how much I loved it.
I really liked the development of the plot and Hitsugaya himself. In fact, I remember reading “The Wooing of Hinamori Momo” (another fic of yours that I loved and need to re-read to review), so when I started this fic I remembered that that one was written mostly on Hinamori’s perspective, so I enjoyed knowing that this one was Hitsugaya’s.
Besides that, I love angst fics, and this one was full of it, so yeah. Chapter six was the one that broke me up. I felt Histsugaya’s anguish so well and neatly that I actually had to stop reading for a couple of hours. I left it in the middle of the fight with Zaraki; no the best part to left it, but well, I needed the break xD. But that only show up your talent as a writer.
I don’t have anything else to say. Maybe just repeat myself once again: I loved your fic!
Now, I don’t even know if your going to read this, so I might as well being expressing myself to no one; it doesn’t matter, thoug. I’m a happy person.
Thanks for writing such beautiful works, and forgive my bad English; it’s not my first language.
Best of wishes for you.
Till next time.
| mrmrb2500 chapter 9 . 5/15/2016
I felt better than I had in weeks. Oh, god. It really ends. Please have a bonus chapter or so? Or the ending did justice to the story. Damn, it's so addicting. Thank you very much, I love your fanfic.
| mrmrb2500 chapter 8 . 5/15/2016
Aww yisss! Finally, finally...Toushiro had been served justice that he deserved. It has been too long, I repeat, too agonizing for him to finally make his move. Yea. I love this fanfic, I love you
| mrmrb2500 chapter 4 . 5/15/2016
Ah, finally. A satisfying end to the chapter without breaking my nerves and feeling my heart wrench. I love how overly detailed the descriptions of the way they felt, truly magnificent. And now, I'm literally reading this on 4:00 in the morning, and just like the two of them...I will rest. Good work!
| smilingostrich chapter 9 . 9/8/2014
So good...but so sad... :( I LOVED THE WRITING THOUGH! IT WAS AMAZING! :)
| Her Pretty Smile chapter 9 . 5/9/2014
Whoa. The developments really caught my breath. I love it. Not to mention that they are all in-character, too, which is a rarity in itself. :)
| Canadawear chapter 1 . 4/24/2014
i have waited all my life for this fic.
thank you for writing this lovely, complex story. I am so excited to see where it goes!
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/29/2013
Wow. This is the best hitsuhina fanfic i've ever seen. I'm not very good in English (I'm german) but I think i have to review this. I love how you made momos character. Shes so heartbroken and sad,I love it.(yes, I'm a cruel person ;) ) I also think Toshiro was so good in character. His concern for momo is so sweet. I love this story because it's not one of those fluffy stories, there everything is like "toshiro loves momo, momo loves toshiro, happy end". I enjoied every part of the story and was kinda sad when it ended. In short: I LOVE THIS FANFIC :D ( this was my longest review i've ever written )
| AmunRa chapter 3 . 6/3/2013
Good story. I like the length of your chapters and the fact that you're very descriptive with your scenes. Yes, the story is angsty, but it fits the situation very well.
| REDROSES13 chapter 9 . 2/2/2013
That was amazing! Like a breath of fresh air! They were "in character" especially hitsugaya. I love how u potrayed him mentally breaking down because of the fear of losing hinamori. The anger he felt and the frustrations that gripped his heart. The strong motivation to grow stronger in order to protect her from harm. I was a little bit pissed how hinamori failed to see his love, his deep devotion to her when she's all about Aizen. The thing about her purely naivete. The naivete to willingly trust anybody. And thats normal for a growing child. Ironically, that she doubted Hitsugaya believing him to be the cause of Aizen' "death." That tiny doubt must have been hard for Hitsugaya as he holds her to a higher regard than she realize. Higher than his life or his position as captain. He display that over protective nature as he abandoned all his values as shown attacking Aizen in blind rage after being tricked into stabbing the only person he really cared for. Hopefully, Hinamori realized that and pull herself together! She's a vice-captain for crying out loud. Hopefully, she finds courage to move on and re-evaluate her life, and the person she wants to be. I loved the angst of your story. Reading it in 2013. Wished there was a sequel. :) peace. Ps. I would have put this on my fave list but I forgot my account password because it has been so long when I last logged in. Hitsuhina fighting!
| chai chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
interesting..readin this in 2012
| AutumnsFlowers chapter 9 . 4/22/2012
This is beyond perfection. Best HitsuHina story Ive ever read, and one of the best story ever. Amazing.
| The Chrysanthemum chapter 9 . 10/23/2011
I'm speechless! Such amazing, brilliant piece of work! I love how you took the time to let the characters speak out and display Hitsugaya's frustrations and Hinamori's agony! I wish they could have been more chapter though. ;b I pray that you will consider writing a sequel to this or a presequel or at least another fantastic story revolving around hitsuhina. Overall, I LOVE IT! :D