|Reviews for The Saddest Lines|
| AC22 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
| Pheo chapter 1 . 12/31/2005
Excellent, really love the ending of the last line.
| JazzyLittleMonster chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
"he sees brown hair that he has drained of colour"
Ooh powerful image. Nice way of putting it.
| LadyMoriel chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
This is darling. I love pensive!Lupin. For some reason I particularly love the phrase "he sees brown hair that he has drained of colour" and the last sentence.
| Nyeren chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Lovely drabble, Banui! Aren't they gloriously fun to write? And read, too, of course. I greatly enjoyed this one.
Heh. And the idea of Remus writing tragic poetry and crossing it out over and over is just a beautiful one. Poor man. Between us, his life is going to be ruined. D
| names are overrated chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
Lovely. Drabbles are wonderful.
| Nightstorm7 chapter 1 . 12/14/2005
wow...very powerful - but so sad *tear*
very very good! keep writing!