Reviews for The New Gray
tenten.me chapter 5 . 1/20
Please please continue your story. It's amazing I beg of u please continue.
love it chapter 5 . 7/2/2014
this is for you to keep writing I can't stop reading it
kuristaru chapter 4 . 7/2/2014
Shikatema plis
DarkAngel1010 chapter 5 . 6/28/2014
Pls update i'm dieing to read chapter 6

PEACE OUT ;3
Tsubaki800 chapter 5 . 6/17/2014
Do you know what the perfect song is for this story? Black or White by Micheal Jackson. Or People Like Us by Kelly Clarkson. Listening to those two song while reading this is so cool... But where is the rest of the story?
Shygirlrules17 chapter 5 . 6/4/2014
Great story please continue!
sasuke140 chapter 5 . 1/18/2014
UPDATE
Guest chapter 5 . 10/13/2013
make next chapter!
the awsome chapter 5 . 7/24/2013
this fanfic is soo awsome :D please continue this cause i cant wait to see what happens
MusicAngel13 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Aaaawwwweeeessssoooommmmeeee start
nejitenfan chapter 5 . 9/18/2012
please update
shadowluvsme chapter 5 . 6/2/2012
Talk about cliff hanger. That was totally cool. I hope you do continue this story because that was totally awesome. I want to know what happens when Tenten find out that Ino is the white rose. Lol.
Guest chapter 5 . 4/8/2012
U know I know a bunch of nejiten writers who abandon their story, I have read this one a year ago and no updates! UpDATe
jasldjfafjdff chapter 5 . 5/7/2011
asdfghjkl i dont think you'll update any time soon but just wanted to say that this is just amazing to read x)
Shy-Tomboy chapter 4 . 4/7/2011
ShikaTema! just because ino is shikamaru's teammate doesn't mean they are suppose to be a can tell that there personality is totally different. shikamaru is a lazy-ass genius and ino is a loud mouth bitch,no offense.
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