Reviews for Perfection
Marie-S-Raven chapter 2 . 5/8
This seems like it could be really good, but it's just too Mary Sue for me. I get that it's just like Cinderella, and that girl really doesn't have flaws, but still. Maybe try spreading out the explanation of why it is she's prefect, so it's not just a paragraph describing how she looks. Remember, it's ALWAYS better to show than tell when it comes to character descriptions. Thank you for writing; it takes a lot of time and courage to make and post a story and I commend you for it, even if it's not my cup of tea.
Gal chapter 12 . 10/25/2016
There were explicit part, but it was awesome!
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2016
Is a great story but you have lots of spelling mistake and some of the sentence doesn't even make sence. You definitely need to rewrite it and let me know when your done i love to read it again.
Princess Niki chapter 3 . 2/10/2016
I've just started reading this and the story seems to have a really great plot and theme, however as you mentioned it does need refinement. please let me know if you ever decide to rewrite this story, I would love to read it!
BlackMagicRose7 chapter 12 . 1/31/2016
I loved this story, I'm glad I got to reread it.
jensenkent chapter 12 . 12/8/2015
This was a beautiful piece of work, I really liked it a lot. I hope to read more of your works later on.
cas chapter 11 . 10/6/2015
i cant find it on Dokuga... can you link it
Undertheskys chapter 7 . 9/29/2015
You should bold the words when theur talking with their in beast and when their talking in inu
Undertheskys chapter 4 . 9/29/2015
I thought her father died... so how is he laughing? in heaven laughing?
Deadpool-girl chapter 12 . 9/30/2014
I loved the story, it was absolutely amazing.
nemesisswan chapter 1 . 9/16/2014
What is it? A quick version of "Cinderella"? Thank you but no thank you. Another story written to look like a cheap soap opera.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/1/2014
ugh hate that sesshomaru had some "quick ruts" i mean wthhhh ):
chibi-Clar chapter 12 . 4/23/2014
Awesome!
So adorable awesome!
Yay!
Go strong kagome!
M.pink chapter 6 . 3/16/2014
His nasty rapist ass
Guest chapter 12 . 9/15/2013
Awesome...
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