Reviews for Unexpected Love
Princess.B.Saber31 chapter 14 . 5/3/2018
AWWWWW FINALLY
Princess.B.Saber31 chapter 11 . 5/2/2018
I’ll admit if Tsunade said they couldn’t seeeavh other I was actually going to jump her and then fight her
Princess.B.Saber31 chapter 9 . 5/2/2018
SASUKE YOU JEALOUS PRICK YOU JUST HAD TO RAT THEM OUT FOR SOMETHING YOU COULDNT HAVE
Alpha CAT 137 chapter 11 . 7/14/2017
Great chapter
Ray chapter 9 . 5/17/2014
Lord, this is a beautiful piece of work. Had me in tears at moments. Please continue this.
clara200 chapter 10 . 1/21/2012
I almost quit reading at chapter 9 because it was ooc but ch 10 was better she knew seperating them would force them to become missing- nin. I don't think she wants them to become Kohana's enemies two strong ninjas like that.
XxMicciexX chapter 2 . 6/5/2011
...a little too OOC...interesting plot...I think? But I HAD to stop at chapter two...Kakashi would've never talked straight out about Sakura's problem like that to her teammates...It totally killed the point of her telling them to leave her alone...and It made him seem extremely meddlesome as not only did he got up in her face to have him tell her what's wrong...he's telling her teammates about it. Some people, in this case Sakura, doesn't appreciate that her Sensei is telling her teammates that she feels utterly useless because they're "bragging". Kakashi would never outright tell anything about someone else's business straight out like that. He would however tell it to them the round about way...which as an example, his bell test. He taught them that teamwork was #1 through it. Not just outright telling them that that's what they needed to do. So yeah...I couldn't get past that kind of word diarrhea from Kakashi to continue. Also you made Sakura a bit too weak...since yours is not an AU, if you followed the storyline (okay so BOTH Sasuke and Naruto was back which meant that Sakura was ALREADY Tsunade's apprentice) there was no way that an apprentice of Tsunade did not pass Jounin when BOTH Naruto and Sasuke did. If her Taijitsu wasn't good, she could've made it up with her superior chakra control, MANY awesome techniques as a medic, and genjutsu. Kurenai wasn't a jounin for nothing, I'm sure her skills in taijutsu were also below average (this is following your 'reason' to why Sakura failed her Jounin test, which shouldn't have been the reason. You should've made it more something like 'unskilled in controlling emotions for quick rational decisions' because I'm sure the test would've never taken someone's one lone inability to master taijutsu as a reason to fail them while disregarding their other many outstanding abilities which would've greatly improved the shinobi force). That's why shinobis were but in teams because what one lacked in one area, the others make up for it. Well considering this is YOUR ff...well yeah I just wanted to point out a few things that threw me off. I hope you don't take this offensively because it's not meant to be. I tried to make it a "constructive criticism", so if this did hurt your feelings in anyway, I sincerely apoligize I've been told I'm sort of insensitive sometimes. But yeah...Good plot though, totally drew me in with your summary. :)
xxxmutil-fandom-loverxxx chapter 2 . 3/21/2010
uh oh
sayM-A-G-G-I-E chapter 16 . 11/20/2009
My only disappointment in this was that Sakura drank (I don't believe in drinking alcohol. I believe that it's wrong. Call me crazy all you want, it's my opinion that matters to me). Other than that it was quite good.
annnuh24 chapter 16 . 4/26/2009
this is great-

will be so much better if

you could make a sequel ]
Broken-Midnight chapter 16 . 3/27/2009
AH It was so good, sorry aboput not reviewing all chapters but had to finish it, Couldn't stop. Great Job!
Yanny88 chapter 16 . 8/31/2008
Wow, that fic was amazing; it had me so moved. I was amazed to see Sasuke accepted the relationship Sakura and Kakashi had. I was also very sad when Tsunade seperated them by force; it almost made me cry at the scene. Please write more! XD
7ven chapter 16 . 4/21/2008
Wow. wonderful exciting and different from the a beautiful up the good work.
anna707 chapter 16 . 3/30/2008
awesome story. i exspecially liked that they waited til marraige for sex. i think it means so much more than. but anyway i loved this story_ so cute
Mewsthecat chapter 1 . 3/11/2008
i love this,it's ArticRose from deviantart, so i got an account and i just love this so yeah...
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