Reviews for Fiancée Fiascos
Keitaro chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
Naru's lips much softer than Mutsumi's!

...No.

thats just silly.
Samhan chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I like it

please continue
CrimsontheBloodyDemonKing chapter 2 . 11/9/2010
Ever going to update?
George Mathew chapter 2 . 7/6/2008
I THINK Faia/Keitaro Paring is Good since she loves him truly and Narusagawa is Just Loose I HOPE TO SEE NEXT CHAPTER

AND ITS BEEN LIKE 1 OR 2 YEARS SO START UPDATING IT DONT KEEP IT UNFINISHED
kidcrud chapter 2 . 2/28/2008
wow you must comeback and update
Taro Taro chapter 2 . 10/26/2007
Must...continue...!
E. 0rchid chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
Wow, this is an excellent story with a very interesting concept! I enjoy your OC's interactions with the other characters, especially Faia's. I certainly hope you go a little more in depth with her character as well as Aisu's, but more so Faia. Here's hoping you update soon!

Smell Ya' Later!
Paintball-Gamer chapter 2 . 2/12/2007
Man... I don't usually go for romantic comedies, but this one has definitely grabbed my attention. I got a good laugh out of a few parts of the story, and your after-chapter sketches with your muse are hilarious. I definitely would like to see how this story turns out.

Aisu is by far my favorite character in this story. He's the only character besides Haruka and MAYBE Keitaro with any ounce of common sense that anyone can see. He knows how to approach any situation rationally, although, sadly, such rationality is lost on Faia. I think he's the only person who can keep Keitaro from going insane from all the chaos.

Faia, well, characters like her annoy me to no end. She's the kind of character who tries to steamroll someone into something, completely ignoring absolutely everything one might do or say to convince her otherwise. She doesn't seem to listen to Keitaro at all unless it involves giving in to her advances. Not to say I hate the story because of her, but DAMMIT, she drives me insane!

Needless to say, I totally ache for Keitaro right now. I'm definitely rooting for the KeiNaru pairing.

Anyway, I should wrap this up. I hope you can update your stories soon, or at least give your loyal readers an indication that you are still there. But like me, you probably have midterms going right now, so don't feel rushed. Believe me, I know how much they can eat into your time. Hopefully you can update AMWAL too. That's definitely one of my favorites.

Great stuff, man! Keep it up!
Begging For a Update chapter 2 . 12/17/2006
You sir, are the best LH fanfic writer I've ever seen. And I've only read Love Hina Fanfics for a year before switching to Naruto after your hiatus. Well, great story so far, and I'm just laughing so hard where Aisu is in. Also, I offically want a harem now, thuogh it's your work, you choose.

*holds up a KeitaroHarem sign*
Puppy Rawr chapter 2 . 11/17/2006
SQUEE!

I mean YAY! xDD This story is sho funneh, and no offense but OMG! I HATE FAIA! SHE SUCKS! I dunno why! I don't even like Keitaro like most girls like Inuyasha XDD But RAWR, I wish Naru and Keitaro were together :O

Keep it up P

~Puppeh
Saico chapter 2 . 11/16/2006
This fic is BIG fun! Will we see some clashes between Faia and Mutsumi? I'm sure Mutsumi wouldn't mind to play Faia's same game.
AznPuffyHair chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
Poor Keitaro. Is anything in his life ever normal? ...wait, that's a rhetorical question .

UPDATE SOON!.
TwilightZekk chapter 2 . 11/5/2006
For a second, I thought that you weren't going to update. Glad you proved me wrong.

This was a good update, but it left me wanting more. It just felt incomplete somehow, as if there wasn't enough plot development.
KatonKageNaruto chapter 2 . 11/4/2006
wow nice a 10-month long update! lol. i hope the next one comes sooner.(i should go update my fics as well... its reaching the 4 month line i belive).

anyway a freaking great awsome amazing etc chapter! i vote for him to end up with Faia, i dont think this is gonna change your mind in anyway, but hey, thats what i want, and ill demand it! bwahahahhaha

so awsome fic, i hope it wont take till next year for it to get updated! ill be waiting impacinetly, you rock!
anonymous chapter 2 . 11/4/2006
Another great chapter! Thank you for updating!
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