| Reviews for To Protect and Serve |
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   lileep07 chapter 1 . 9/20/2024 The opening chapter has my attention. I can't wait to keep reading. |
| The Reviewer chapter 17 . 7/27/2022 Very late to the party, but better late than never I guess :D Absolutely wonderful, gripping and nail biting fic. Every chapter was a masterpiece, every dialogue was important and contributed to the plots. Krutin is almost at the top of the best villains I've ever read about. The motive and the devious planning he had was chilling and yeah he did scare me a bit damn Love to see Frank and Nancy as well and I'm glad you gave closure to every minor plotline and made everything make sense in the end. Gotta say, "Please give my regards to Miss Shaw" has really sent a chill through me goddamnn XD Once again, amazing fic. Completed over 15 years ago but one of the best I've ever read. |
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/28/2022 Ah shit, here we go again. The FBI didn't issue 9 millimeter Glocks until after 2016 (are you a prophet or something? LOL). Upon qualification, an FBI special agent is issued a full-size Glock 22 or compact Glock 23 semi-automatic pistol, both of which are chambered in the .40 S&W cartridge. The Glock 22 and 23 are basically the Glock 17 and 19 in .40 S&W, respectively. In May 1997, the FBI officially adopted the Glock, in .40 S&W, for general agent use, and first issued it to New Agent Class 98-1 in October 1997. In June 2016, the FBI awarded Glock a contract for new handguns. Unlike the currently issued .40 S&W chambered Glock pistols, the new Glocks will be chambered for 9 mm Parabellum. The contract is for the full-size Glock 17M and the compact Glock 19M. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/27/2022 Ah, my bad. I didn't wait for the next sentence to explain that was a signal. That's what I get for being too focused on the details, I guess. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/27/2022 Another inaccuracy to point out: Big Macs are McDonald's items. Burger King sells Whoppers. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/27/2022 I know you said not to review and tell you that you're incorrect, but I want to point out that the Federal Witness Protection Program is run by the United States Marshals Service, not the FBI. It's been 15 years since you completed this story, so this is probably pointless, but I'm kind of a stickler for the details. |
| thereisaredeemer chapter 17 . 1/21/2022 Okay, great ending. Nancy chose right, but what on earth is that last sentence?! What connection is Callie? Is she alive? |
| thereisaredeemer chapter 13 . 1/21/2022 The tension is ramping up and it’s getting to me. This is really well done. Love Joe’s brotherly protective attitude. |
| Eva Haller chapter 17 . 6/8/2021 This was a great story; I loved it the first time I read it and I love it now. Thank you, and have a wonderful summer! All the best Eva |
| Karateka67 chapter 12 . 8/2/2020 Awesome chapter |
| Karateka67 chapter 9 . 8/1/2020 Definitely raid the swing dancing club |
| Karateka67 chapter 5 . 7/29/2020 This chapter flows so gracefully |
| Karateka67 chapter 5 . 7/29/2020 I think it’s funny that most ff writers make Ned the bad guy when he could just be the high school/college sweetheart that didn’t work out |
| novembershowers chapter 17 . 8/14/2019 I am completely charmed by this story and Nancy and Frank... absolutely loving it! I realized I am not a good reader and I wasn’t able to leave a review even though I have read this fanfic more than once. That is how much I like this! Keep writing! |
| Shilpa chapter 17 . 8/8/2019 Amazing story! Very well written -plot, characters, everything! I, for one, am reading such a good fanfic after ages! I usually don't read ones with Nancy, but this one I had to! Thank you for writing this, Rosa! Grateful to you for that. :) |