|Reviews for Can't look at you|
| Rosajean chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Dang! Short and hot! I just wish it was longer... more detailed... ;)
| NoahIrene chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
you are terrific at writing these one-shots!
| kessey chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
I love one shots.
Good story. To the point, but used enough literary devices to make it good.
| loverly8 chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Very good. I noticed one spelling mistake: It's bear not bare, for the way you've written it. Anyways, keep on writing.
| Carathel-Snape chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
THis is how i spell awsome-Shimbles
| Angel of the day chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
I like it! It is so cute! and sweet!
| XXXSilverFangXXX chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
shimbles,sorry to offened you but i have not read any of your other things. until now and i have to say this one was also very good.
my humble apologies,AidenShadowbreeze
| Puppet-Cat chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
| Celtic-Witch chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Great story! You should continue it !
| rinny08 chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
| PiperLeoEternally chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
lol, that was a good oneshot! yay!
| Hellion The Aesthetic chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
that was HAWT! thank you. somehow you managed to be both straightforward and coy with this
| OnlyAtNight chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Why oh Why doens't this happen in my workplace? Big sigh.
| Shameenie chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
OH MAH GOD! That was perfect... Omg I don't know what to say... I was a little confused at first as to how old they both were, but it was written so well and so perfectly...
It had raunchiness and fluff too. Although it did seem a little short, but it was excellent all the same.
It did remind me of my story but I think yours was better.
Keep up the great work.
| KellyRoxton chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Great Job.. Truly wonderful I wish it was not a oneshot I wish you told of what happened in the morning a little...