Reviews for Can't look at you
LissaDream chapter 1 . 4/7
Rosajean chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
Dang! Short and hot! I just wish it was longer... more detailed... ;)
NoahIrene chapter 1 . 8/18/2009

luv it!

you are terrific at writing these one-shots!

great job!

kessey chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
I love one shots.

Good story. To the point, but used enough literary devices to make it good.
loverly8 chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Very good. I noticed one spelling mistake: It's bear not bare, for the way you've written it. Anyways, keep on writing.

Carathel-Snape chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
THis is how i spell awsome-Shimbles
Angel of the day chapter 1 . 3/11/2006
I like it! It is so cute! and sweet!
XXXSilverFangXXX chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
shimbles,sorry to offened you but i have not read any of your other things. until now and i have to say this one was also very good.

my humble apologies,AidenShadowbreeze
Puppet-Cat chapter 1 . 2/9/2006
great story
Celtic-Witch chapter 1 . 1/12/2006
Great story! You should continue it !
rinny08 chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
PiperLeoEternally chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
lol, that was a good oneshot! yay!
Hellion The Aesthetic chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
that was HAWT! thank you. somehow you managed to be both straightforward and coy with this
OnlyAtNight chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
Why oh Why doens't this happen in my workplace? Big sigh.
Shameenie chapter 1 . 12/15/2005

OH MAH GOD! That was perfect... Omg I don't know what to say... I was a little confused at first as to how old they both were, but it was written so well and so perfectly...

It had raunchiness and fluff too. Although it did seem a little short, but it was excellent all the same.

It did remind me of my story but I think yours was better.

Keep up the great work.

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