Reviews for Written on the wall
xxasianicexx chapter 4 . 1/31/2009
hehe love the omake! nice sixsome relationship 'cept instead of dirty/golden/silver it would be funnier with platinum as well :P
xquisittexabie chapter 9 . 6/17/2008
O i wana c nanjirou molesting fuji nd atobe again, dont leave it like this please? update soon?
takari love chapter 9 . 12/13/2007
Wow, this is a great fic..

I can't wait for the next chapter...

kingtuts chapter 9 . 6/17/2007
tht's some wacked story..kinky in a gd way..somewat.

TisonlyMeNow chapter 9 . 2/16/2007
pls update a.s.a.p!
Ookami Fuu chapter 9 . 2/7/2007
OMG! LOVE THIS CHAPTER! LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT! _ I never knew that Fuji could be that strong, considering the fact that he's shorter than Atobe and is pretty much more slender than him as well... O_O;; I guess frightening measures calls for frightening actions... or in this case, power... Update soon!
yamatoforever chapter 9 . 12/30/2006
That was hilarious! Never judge a book from it's cover. Who ever though that it was Fuji who usually acts as the seme? Even to the four! And Nanjiroh really was a pervert! I can't stop laughing imagined that Atobe ran outside with the costume! If someone saw it... It would be bad for the big ego person like Atobe. Please post the next chapter quickly!
Denite chapter 9 . 12/25/2006
I haven't read too many OT5 fictions but I love this story. It was really nicely written. Hah, Ryoma's dad is such a perv and I can just feel Tez. & San. anger seeing Atobe & Fuji get molested in front of them.

My favorite chapter so far is Lens. I adored a fragile Fuji and I love the line, "to make you mine."

Have a Merry Christmas and I will look forward to the next chapter
Dark Angelus chapter 9 . 12/25/2006

Keigo is a spoil uke ... XD And i love it!
RuByMoOn17 chapter 9 . 12/25/2006
For Kunimitsu and Ryoma, I never thought their pillar relationship involve with striptease dancing, the ways they roll over the metal pillar as they strip never make me bored.”

This made me have a nosebleed XPP
Ria Sakazaki chapter 9 . 12/24/2006
update! update!
Bonnie Mizuhara chapter 8 . 11/20/2006
Hooray for OT5!
Bonnie Mizuhara chapter 7 . 11/20/2006
Haha, that was hilarious! Tezuka is a super-seme? Lol! Super seme Tezuka! I love reading cute arguments in the OT5!
Bonnie Mizuhara chapter 5 . 11/20/2006
Return of Nanjiroh! Aw poor Ryoma-chan...
Bonnie Mizuhara chapter 4 . 11/20/2006
Sounds different from your other one-shots or maybe they all follow a storyline? Ryoma puts -san at the end, that sounds kind of weird and well, I like the sixsome pairings in the sixsome too!
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