alas, you updated it's my lucky day! (btw i know alas means oh crap, but go to you'll understand) that Katara, she always knows what to do. I mean it, the first chapter I read I loved from the start,and now it just keeps getting better and better! I mean a few more chapters, and I'll have to make a "Shattered" fan club!

Great chapter! Well thought out, organized, and original. The treatment, although slightly strange to envision, was very detailed. I loved how you did the maggots bit.

*must remember that if she's ever injured out in the wild* ... *or not*

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Thanks for updating so fast! ; And of course you get threatening reviews. They make you feel wanted... and, of course, threatened.

;3 As long as you continue to update quickly, those reviews will be empty threats. (if I used the term correctly. xD)

Update soon!

- Ryu

wow... I really didn't see that coming. _ I guess it's too much to hope for a Katara/Zuko fic, though, lol... *is a fan of the pairing*

hey, what can I say? I'm jacked up on sugar. it's great, and btw, I didn't eat a whole bag of candy hearts, I ate 9 full bags! horray! and now I think I have trouble seeing strait, hehehe *sweatdrop* and... I hope you upate soon!

OMG! *diefaintgasp*

That was one of the most awesome stories I've read here. You NEED to update soon, or I will personally find out where... *pause* Sorry 'bout that. I'm partially insane at times. ;D

But, seriously, this is one of the most awesome stories I've read. I don't know why there aren't 200 reviews, or something. And, you seem to update fast! (one of the qualities I wish I could magically obtain. xD) I also love how the paragraphs are long. xD No matter how hard I try, I can't fit all that much into one paragraph.

* It's probably 'cause I write on looseleaf, and the paragraphs /look/ long...

I love how your have Zuko evolve. All of the characters are very in... well, character. xD Depression is always fun to write, ya know. I do wonder what is happening with Iroh, Zhao, and Fire Lord Ozai... oh yes, and Aang. 3

*sniffle* Poor Appa...

I've been waiting for 12 chapters to review, sorry if it's too long. :P

- Ryu

PS : Did I mention "update quickly"? I hope I did. ;3

oh! picking on poor Appa ... yep, you guessed it, my favorite character. Momo is kewl and what a place to strand me ... not that i don't need to get back to work Looking forward to more.

oh gawd - beautiful. characterization is wonderful. Clean, crisp and true to my viewing. Your OC is very nicely done, as was the characterization of the villagers. sigh. wish i was as good. on to read more

*sighs* I wish all of my other story authors would update as good as you do. _ Its so much nicer than waiting six months for one update but I suppose sometimes it can't be helped. I was kinda wondering when Katara and Soka would show up again. _ Poor Appa! Traveling for 22 days with that wound! Hm, I wonder how Zuko, Sokka and Katara are going to get along. ' Hopefully they wont kill each other before they rescue Aang. Which brings up the question of whats happening to poor Aang and Momo right now. Oo They can't be in very good condition _ If nothing else their probably half starved. Poor Aang. I'm also kinda wondering how its going with Iroh. Well, anyways, great chapter. I can't wait till your next one.

You know, this is quite possibly becoming one of my favorite fics in the Avatar corner of ficdom. It

has all the hallmarks of a good fic -

Good Characterization - Zuko is recognizably Zuko and yet his experiences have realistically grown his character. With the addition of Katara and Sokka, I firmly expect to see them kept in character as

well.

Good Plot - I freely admit, I'm a plot 'ho. The technical small stuff can make or break a story with me, but it all begins with a good plot.

Interesting secondary characters - You created a new character. Not once have I thought she was a Mary-Sue. She has depth and feeling and she's becoming as alive as the rest. You can easily picture her in an

episode of Avatar. Best of all, she didn't fall through her computer, land on top of Zuko and turn out to be a beautiful, green-eyed, flame-haired, 16 year girl named Brianna who is a martial arts prodigy. Thank you for that.

Grammar, punctuation and Spelling - These three things can't be stressed enough and you do a wonderful job with them. There has been many a story out there that had a wonderful plot and premise, but the technical

errors got to be so overwhelming that I just couldn't read anymore.

And just to prove how much I've liked this story - I'm a 'shipper. I rarely read (unless it's a short one-shot) fic stories that don't have an element of shippiness to them. This story, I was happily content

with seeing it as just a Zuko character development story. Although, now that Katara has shown up, I definitely wouldn't turn my nose up at seeing a little side something going on. :-)

Thank you for the good read.

Caeria

Sqwee! That was a cool twist, I wasn't expecting Sokka and Katara entering the story, especially not that way.

Really good chapter, can't wait for next one. Hope you update soon.

hip-hip-horray! you updated, and I'm especialy happy because I got myself some wallpaper! three letters- F.U.N.

well, anyways, I'm so happy you updated, and with the people (and fights) coming together too! so... I really don't have much to say, except I gots to do my homework! (yippie)

so... update soon... yup (or I'll eat your brains, m m m toasty, taste like Quizznos; Have a good Valentines day please! guess what? update or else I'll eat your brains! I like brains, I remember this one time, I was like: update or I'll eat your brains! I like brains, I remember this one time, I was like: update or I'll eat your brains! good times, good times... This has to be the longest parenthises ever, well I guess it just shows how much I lurv your story!)

*winces* At least Anko is there to stop Kisara and Zuko's fighting. _

I got one interesting question: Will Zuko help them or not?

Poor Appa. (hugs Appa) If he dies, how are Sokka and Kisara going to tell Aang? (when if Aang will be free)

Updated soon! Keep it up _ Ciao!

_ Another chapter! And now we know about Anko's past. *sighs* If only the Fire Lords were a buch of warmongerers(sp?) then that stupid war would have never started! _ Maybe when Zuko becomes fire Lord (I have no doubt that he will eventualy unless the person behind the plot wants to throw a curv ball at us) he'll be smart enough to avoid meaningless war. *snickers* Maybe hanging around someone from the opposing side will have a good affect on him. Well, I can't wait till you next chapter! (Oh, I almost forgot to congradulate you on how fast your getting the chapters out recently. )

Ah I can see Anko and Zuko slowly get along. Really slowly. _

Zuko now already knows Anko's past, I wonder how long when zuko finally decided to tell her about his past.

I can't wait! _ Updated soon I hope.