Reviews for Shattered
RetaroO chapter 11 . 1/19/2006
horry, you updated! Anko, that speach brought tears to my yes *sniffle*

Zuko: oh please

me: your welcome, I'm still glad you updated, that means I have a at least one chapter to review to, the more chapters there are, the more reviews you'll get from... mua? I dunno french (I think) for "me"... so, yeah... update soon please
Spellcaster Hikaru chapter 10 . 1/16/2006
Yay! New chapter! Thanks for the review reply. Its so nice when I get those. Poor Zuko. _ It is rather sad that the only one who realy cares about him is his uncle(and possibly Aang because Aang's just nice that way and probably would help Zuko if he would let him). Gr! Thinking about all those stupid people at the Agni Kai(especialy his sister) makes me so mad! _ Once Zuko gets over the stage of mistrusting Anko maybe she'll be able to realy cheer him up some. Well, I need to do homework that I have been neglecting. -_- I'll see you next chapter.
RetaroO chapter 4 . 1/16/2006
me: I'm not crazy, insane or mentally retarded... thank you for your time... since I didn't say it last time cause I was to busy laughing, Update soon PLEASE!
RetaroO chapter 10 . 1/16/2006
omg, it's me again!

everyone: *groan*

me: Oh come on, I'm not THAT bad... right?

*silence*

me: right? *hands out money*

everyone: ... right, right.

me: so... when is it going to get more... actiony? ya know: fights, the scroll, finding out he's a prince; eh? Eh!

WEL... I bet you know what I'm going to say next so, I'm not gonna say it. Instead... CHICKAN! ! animal Crossing !
DeafLizgon chapter 10 . 1/16/2006
o_O Even I'm more surprise Saki give Zuko a huge foods. (snicker) "Growing boys" For one weird reason, it reminds me of Sokka had saying the same thing.

(pet Misha) I wonder the little girl take liking Zuko? Hmm... Well, I can't wait to find out next chapter. _

Updated soon!
Hyunkel aka OR chapter 9 . 1/15/2006
The story is good. Can't wait for next chapter.
The Fuzy Llama chapter 9 . 1/15/2006
so I'm guessing burning the bed is like wetting the bed, lol. wouldn't it be great if Zuko was a water bender? _ You're writing style is very strong in details. *nods* the whole thing about bending after a concusion, and Anko thinking she didn't bank the fire well enough... etc... it all brings a ring of truth to your story. I can't wait to hear what Saki has to say. _
RetaroO chapter 6 . 1/15/2006
I know I talked to you like, 3 time today, but just given you a heads up, on chapter 9, at the top you put chapter 5... oh yeah and for the tird time- update soon!

PS: I hope you liked my last review

Pss: I hope you consider my last review *sweatdrop*
AnimeBando33 chapter 9 . 1/15/2006
Hey, i like this story, its original! _ Nice to get something new and different, although I feel bad for poor Zuko...

Keep up the good work!
RetaroO chapter 7 . 1/15/2006
In honor of me...(*and others*)? aw, so nice, it was hard finding a chapter to reply on because I reviewed on so many!

Zuko: yeah, because you don't have any social life...

me: *sweat drop* right... pretend you didn't hear that

Zuko: How could she NOT hear that, I'm right here!

me: Why are you even here! Get back in the story where you belong!

Zuko: One second, Retoo only reviewed to see if you could read her essay about Confucius *cough*Iroh*Cough* to see if it's good. Oh, yeah that's nice making her like your comments and then reward her by springing up this piece of crap on her? RREALL nice.

me: sh! ok, SOME of that was true... BUT it's not crappy-

Zukko: Right

me:-as I was saying, it's not crappy, and I was just wondering if you could review it because your such a good writter? yes? no? maybe so?.. oh yeah, ahem..

I luf ur st0rry SO much!1!one update s00n, ksyabyi!
RetaroO chapter 8 . 1/14/2006
aw, your so nice, for you and your story, I promise to get better soon... That means you better update this weekend, for you fans; for me; for Martin Luther King Jr.!
Spellcaster Hikaru chapter 9 . 1/13/2006
Woot! _ New chapter! Anko's so cool. Poor Zuko though is still reeling from his injury as well as his disownment(though less so now). ...I can't think of much to say today. _ I'm not in much of a talkative mood right now so this will be a crapy short review. Sorry. Anyway, I can't wait till the next chapter and we find out what new disaster awaits Zuko.
Caeria chapter 9 . 1/12/2006
Another excellent chapter. Loved the bit about Zuko setting his bed on fire. How mortifying for our proud Prince.
avafangirl chapter 9 . 1/11/2006
wow nice chapter! poor Zuko thou...it's sad when he has that dream. ohh it also fortelled that Zuko's gonna help the Avatar! update soon plz, can't wait for the next chapter!

~Avafangirl~
RetaroO chapter 9 . 1/11/2006
So glad you updated, horray! party! Well, I would have reviewed to every chapter since like, ch.6 like i always do, but I'm sick as hell and my mom didn't let go on the computer, keep up the good work, and update soon please!
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