Reviews for Shattered
Spellcaster Hikaru chapter 8 . 1/7/2006
Woot! This story is so good! _ I love Anko! (every time I see her i picture Anko from Naruto) Poor Zuko though. The fire Lord and Zhao are just EVIL! XP Anko will set him straight though. It'll be interesting to see how he reacts to farming and what not. *smile* Anko will probably enjoy having a helping hand and his firebending might actualy come in handy. Well, I can't wait till your next chapter. _ Please update soon.
DeafLizgon chapter 8 . 1/6/2006
*grin* found it! This is an interesting story. Zuko's father is so evil and so is Zhao too! _

I'm impressed that Anko could not leave Zuko alone to the people in this town, including the four men.

And I love Misha that way you created her as a foxcat, very good idea. Even Misha's not afraid of Zuko and I admired her courage to sleeping with Zuko. _ it's sweet for Misha.

I'd look forward to read next chapters. I wonder what happen to Aang after Sokka and Katara in Ch. 5. Is he still trapped in Zhao's ship or Fire Nation?

Keep it up! I'm already put it on Story Alert. _
The Fuzy Llama chapter 8 . 1/5/2006
never would have suspected Anko to be an earth bender... then again, she is a farmer. _ It seems like both Zuko and Anko (omg, they rhyme! x_x) have secrets of their pasts the would prefer to not reveal. Too bad for Zuko since we watch him on television! _ I'm very interested in seeing where the plot is headed...
Indiehippie chapter 6 . 1/4/2006
Oh~ the drama builds! I love this story! Is there going to be some sort of relationship between Anko and Zuko?
Caeria chapter 6 . 1/4/2006
Poor Zuko. He definitely has a good case of depression.
Caeria chapter 5 . 1/4/2006
Very interesting so far. Liked the character of Anko. If only all original characters were as well crafted as she is.
Rashaka chapter 5 . 1/3/2006
Why doesn't this have more reviews? I mean seriously, why? It's very cool so far... first because I love Zuko-goes-it-alone fics. Second because your OC is interesting and believable (with hints of a life more interesting than a farmer's in her past.) Third because you just brought us back to Sokka and Katara, which means things will get even more fun pretty soon, I think.

I liked your descriptions of Zuko and Iroh's reactions to the renewed exile, and I liked the parting scene. I liked the villager's various theories about Zuko (especially the superstitious idea that he might be cursing them), and the details in describing Anko's bartering and haggling. I also loved the little detail that Zuko had a stubble. THERE is something a lot of ficcers forget when writing about teenage boys... that at 16 some of them have the beginnings of facial hair.

Your narrative flows well, your dialogue is interesting, and your characterization of Zuko is one the solemn side of believable. Usually I would protest that he be more proactive as a character, but you've set things up pretty well to explain his behavior- all he can do now is wait. And Zuko is definitely the kind to sulk while waiting, so it works.

Anyway, don't let too much time before updating again. I notice that in 15 days you posted 5 chapters... that makes me hopeful that the wait won't be too long. :smile:
Winkaku chapter 5 . 1/2/2006
This is a very interesting story and I truely hope you continue to right because I would love to see where it goes.

You've made an excellent oc, she is one of my favorite characters in the story.
me-obviously chapter 5 . 12/30/2005
Poor Zuko. So Aang's going to come back, this isn't an Ozai wins fic? I hope it isn't, those are always horribly depressing. Update soon.
The Fuzy Llama chapter 4 . 12/28/2005
omg, omg, OMG! You can do characterization! Your original characters don't turn out like crap! I LOVE THIS STORY!
avafangirl chapter 2 . 12/26/2005
ohh that was a sad chapter! I think that you did really well with keeping Zuko's character when he was sad and keep up your great writing!

~Avafangirl
RetaroO chapter 3 . 12/23/2005
THIS STORY ROCKS!

ZUKO: Hey, I'm miserable and that "rocks" how?

me: It just works out that way Zuko *hugs*

Zuko: I'll take the unhappiness if you let go of me

me: deal... sucker

btw, update soon, Merry happy ChristmaHannaKwanzaka!
JuJuJuice chapter 2 . 12/19/2005
This...is...great! I can tell that this is gonna be an awesome story! Man, I love drama. It makes me wanna cry. (Sniff, sigh) Please keep going!
Toboe'sBabe chapter 2 . 12/18/2005
aw *tear* that was sad, but good. can't wait for more.
RetaroO chapter 2 . 12/18/2005
oh yeah, update soon
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