:3 Yay.

So ends the best Avatar story I've read yet.

Thanks for writing, you!

I've been following this story for quite some time (since the second or third chapter came out, I think) and I love it. I want to applaud your character Anko; usually OCs are Mary Sues or very close, but she was well developed, completely believable, and overall NOT a Mary Sue. But of course you knew that XD.

I think you did a great job keeping everyone in character the entire time. Zuko's transition was also very believable; again, I applaud you.

Awesome story overall! This has to be one of my favorite Avatar fics. Is there going to be a sequel? I hope so! Keep writing!

That was... great and good ending. (sniffles) And poor Misha as well. (pet Misha) I hope someday...someday they will run into each other again. _

(sigh) Now we're back to the same old cycle again... (paused) Anways, I'm off to read Chapter 25. _

What can I say? it's a teriffic stroy and I'd love to hear more, but if that's the end, tis kool. So Rioh, that old dog, let the Avatar out? well, gave him the tools to escape is more like it...YAY FOR MOMO!

Heh, I think you might find this funny, there's a girl on my softball team named mo...so we call her momo...I wonder what she'd look like with humongo ears and a tail *ponders*

But anyhoo, I love your writing, and I'd love to read anything and everything avatar related from you! -Peace out...ArcherofDarkness

I definately know what u mean when u say u r both happy & sad 2 c this story end. As a writer I feel that way when I finish my own stories, & as a reader when an especially good story comes 2 an end. This was most definately one of the especially good ones. Believe me when I say I will keep a look out 4 u in the future, u r an excellent writer! Anko wuz an absolutely brilliant character! The way u laid clues throughout the story of what she really was & when u finally told us... well it wuz awesome! U also did a great job of portraying the characters we've all come 2 know & love thru the series... all in all a terrific story! So again, I'll keep a watch 4 u, & thanks 4 writing & posting this story! It wuz awesome! Cheers! ~IceStar

give me a sequal, maybe a prequal, don't leave me hanging, my head is banging, right the new story, or your death'll be gory, i own the army, that killed barney, if i killed him i can kill you, cause murder is something i can do. )

bye,

the truly phsyco jennifer gomez (see what happens when i get bored?)

Bravo! (applauds) Absolutely gorgeous. I loved reading this and I hope I'll have the chance to enjoy the sequel just as much (hint, hint). Fabulous.

This whole story was AMAZING ! I've been reading it since pretty much right when you started writng it, but I could never think of anything to say, cause it was so good it left me speechless! It's my favorite story, please write another, doesn't even have to be a sequel, just any story!

YAY! It was amazing X10! Really liked the ending. It went with all the charaters. And It was really really really (Goes on for about an hour longer) great! I hope you write more stories!

NO! *dies*

A sequel would be nice. Definetly. I feel bad that the story is over. I seriously looked up at the roof of my room and screamed NO! when it ended.

I like how the ending was, As if this was a movie, happy and continuous, like other fanfictions tend to end (like katara and Zuko fall in love, or Aang dies or crap like that) I like how your story was able to fit in the show so well!

I definetly hope to see more from you, and I think your CRAZY good at writing fan fictions.

And so we go, Kin.

Read chapters 17-23 today. Very very good! I was absolutely entranced! Iroh was certainly an unexpected twist. My only question now is... what the heck did Momo do to get Zhao in so much trouble...? ; Hope I'll get to find out the answer soon, hahah!

Bravo! Didn't get around to commenting on chapter 22 (which was very well done) before chapter 23 appeared. General Anko, eh? Nice little twist,that... bringing in Iroh and a glimpse into Anko's history. She's still very human, by the way, in spite of being a 'master'. Not all-powerful, and just a little cranky, lol.

I liked the scenes showing Zuko fighting side by side with the water tribe teens. Again, they're reactions are spot on for their ages. Especially the quips between Zuko and Sokka - you do understand teenage boys.

One note: remember not to have more than one person speaking within the same paragraph. New speaker, new paragraph. Caught this error here and there (ok, so it sounds nit-picky, but the rest of the story is written so well, I just had to mention it!).

What is next, I wonder?

Cheers,

AvidReaderAlso

Great story! I can't wait for the last chapters! Love it!

YAY! That's great. THey had to leave cause of a leamur. PERFECT! LOVED IT! It made me happy! And I'm no longer stressed! YAY again!