Reviews for Curse of Fate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Just a Spade casually dropping by ️ |
![]() ![]() ![]() The more I think about it, the more that Nellie reminds me of Lambo Bovino from Katekyo Hitman Reborn with the way she speaks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey I noticed you had 9 in sub script to make it look like the 3 has to be in super script "Ctrl," "Shift" and "" keys on your keyboard to turn on the Superscript the same to turn it off if your using word or Google docs Love your story |
![]() ![]() I have loved this story so far. I'm sorry the world has conspired against you finishing it, and I hope you feel better. Take care of yourself, and whatever you love writing, keep up the good work. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm sorry to hear you've decided to discontinue this story for now. whilst i didn't enjoy the written structure of the first few chapters as your story grew i found myself not wanting to stop reading. I hope your health continues to improve from your update on your main profile and i will be having a glance at a few of your other stories. |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really am enjoying this, but the weird inconsistencies are a teeny bit annoying. If Harry wanted to die so badly, you should probably have had him explain why his goals have changed so drastically. It’s not a huge problem, because I can imagine all sorts of reasons for myself, but it might still be a good idea to explain stuff. Also, there are some things that are known in canon, like the names of characters, that you’ve changed. For example, Luna Lovegood’s dad is called Xenophilius, there’s no need to invent a name for him. But that’s just a little detail, the fic is still great. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Voldemort’s wand is yew, I’m pretty sure, not ebony. Apart from that small inconsequential detail, I’m really enjoying this so far. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love that dam snake |
![]() ![]() ![]() I enjoyed this story, thanks for sharing as much as you have . Illness also forced me to stop writing, An indicator of how bad it is. I hope it eases and that you grow well again. Really curious to see what Harry gets up to, I was enjoying thebuild up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoping Severus will be part of Lucius and Harry love life |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! I have completely entirely wholly loved your fic I am sorry to hear of your health troubles, I hope you are healed and faring much better now :) This was beautifully thought out, plotted and written Like many, I'm sure, I would have loved to see this finished, and would if you ever find the motivation and time and health to get back to it, (though I doubt it given the decade gone by) Thank you so much for sharing nonetheless, it was a joy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i enjoyed your story and hope your health improves and your muse returns someday |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm just gonna ignore the Salem School and replace it with Ilvermorny. |