Reviews for YuGiOh GX: The Eternal Soul of the Duelists
ForensicDuelist4137 chapter 3 . 12/28/2005
I like the plot and everything, but you need better spacing. 1 blank line between speakers, and put LP on it's own line
Agent of the Divine One chapter 3 . 12/27/2005
It certainly is convenient that Ayato is chased by girls to the next location in the story. However, I am intrigued by how staunchly offended Akari is by what was clearly an accident. You are also making use of the infamous cliff hangar in order to keep readers interested. It's worked! Post soon!
The Only Innocent Writer Here- Yumi chapter 3 . 12/27/2005
Cool, and a Merry Chirstmas to you!
Anon chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
You should revise this. Your paragraphs are horrible. The grammar could use some work and there are spelling errors. You should also try to be more descriptive and have a little flow in the story; it was choppy.
The Only Innocent Writer Here- Yumi chapter 2 . 12/19/2005
The Only Innocent Writer Here- Yumi chapter 1 . 12/19/2005
dbzgtfan2004 chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
This is a cute and cool story. Please continue. Jaden and Alexis forever.
Matt and T.K chapter 1 . 12/16/2005
please update!-T.K.
Travelling Reviewer chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
The Millennium Ring, and all the other Items, were lost after the Ceremonial Duel, falling into a DEEP ABYSS that is NOT SOMETHING THEY CAN BE RECOVERED FROM! They've served their purpose, which is *not* to be the shiny decorative object of some Stu.

And if Yuugi had any children, they would still be in diapers. Yu-Gi-Oh GX is about five to ten years after Yu-Gi-Oh. It's possibly less, as we have seen some of the characters from the original and they have *not* aged noticeably. So kindly remove the Gary Stu and write about the characters we actually know and *care* about, with THEIR storyline, not someone coming and making it all revolve around THEM.

And yes, there is a plot to Yu-Gi-Oh GX. It also doesn't matter if he *were* Yuugi's son. That doesn't give him anything like any extra dueling talent or any special cards. This is just another vain attempt to making your Stu "special" instead of working to actually develop a REAL character.

By the way, those who are in Obelisk don't have roommates. Ever. There also aren't any girls in any of the other dorms. All girls are already Obelisk Blues at Duel Academia. So no being promoted.

Frankly, the duel in here sucks. What a cheap deck of direct damage crap. No honor as a duelist at *all*. Seto wouldn't have someone like this in his Academy. Respect the creatures and respect your opponent. The proctors are supposed to be testing your basic duel strategy, and this guy didn't pull *anything* stop magic and trap cards? Please.

Also, VERY EXTRA cheap on his spirit being the Kuriboh, what with Juudai's being the Hane Kuriboh. What's the matter, not creative enough to pick a different card? Especially since just because you have one, it doesn't make you SPECIAL.
Earthpaw chapter 1 . 12/15/2005
OH! So does someone else have the Millennium Ring or is it still Bakura? And that's cool that you made Ayato's spirit guardian Kuriboh. Please update soon. :3
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