Reviews for Abyssus
Suzululu4moe chapter 3 . 5/24
though he could secretly have one of his clones stalk the first years to their beginner lessons to learn how to operate the stick.

XD discovered a discreet way to vanish blood… it would be great during missions

and wait till he learns about Legalimancy…. mind reading without harming the victim…. and obliviating…. as well as imperious… get the target to do things…. like sign important trade documents, false evidence and stuff in the name of the greater good of Konoha.

undetectable space expansion charm to hide things while everyone would just look for storage scrolls and seals and from his person... he could have a whole armoury on his person, even in a pocket in his boxers/underwear.

a feather light charm could be used on his teammates for when he has to carry them to escape. bubblehead to breath underwater, making them assume he has drowned.
hygeine cleaning charms for when showers, laundry machines and toilet papers aren't accessible.

apparition to sort of travel like his sensei. he could go back to his country in just by doing a lil twist
Suzululu4moe chapter 2 . 5/24
a haha the twins.

XD yes a kakashi quirk ahahah super speed eater….even the Akamichi can’t eat as fast as he does.

well he might not be able to raikiri him… but who is to say he can’t genjutsu troll him or thousand year of pain him.

hmm i wonder where is his porn.

i wonder if he will kill a house elf by accident while they are cleaning…. surprising an anbu is a bad idea.

lol the last line… i wonder if it was out of hygiene or if it was because he doesn’t want to scare the kids XD

ove how he descriped his stick.
Suzululu4moe chapter 1 . 5/24
i fear for padfoots life... anbu mode kakashi is gonna interrogate/terminate him.

XD nindogs. hmm i pity mrs norris.

hmm dogs in the school... Sirious won't be the only randomly appearing dog in the school now.
Haru chapter 35 . 4/19
Haru chapter 6 . 4/19
The Prof appears!
Sumei1 chapter 35 . 11/14/2014
This was so good! I have no suggestions - this was excellent!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
DON'T TELL MY PARENTS! I FINALLY MADE AN ACCOUNT! (I'll go make my FF account now...)
Guest chapter 35 . 8/13/2014
I love this story! If I ever get an account (*moan* Four more long years... I'll get an Email in four long years) I will most defiantly put this on my favorites!
Guest chapter 34 . 8/13/2014
Kashi's an Animagus ?
Guest chapter 19 . 8/12/2014
...I'm now even more terrified of Bushy Brows and Uber Brows... Bushy managed to get past Nii-san's Sand Shield. TWICE!
Guest chapter 12 . 8/11/2014
Can Gai have a one way ticket back home, via Kakashi's foot to his rear end?
Guest chapter 6 . 8/11/2014
Guest chapter 4 . 8/11/2014
If 'Kashi runs into another boggart, can you CHIDORI HIS FREKING SS!? Please?
ArcanePracti-cat chapter 35 . 8/10/2014
Heh, it's really quite nice to read a story without a manipulative dumbledore clouding things up. :P In this fic, he was rather more like a background grandfather.
Anyway, I liked this story. :P I'll check out your other stuff. it seems you may have a sequel? :P
Toya chapter 35 . 7/17/2014
I love it i love it i absolutely love it thank you sooooooo much for this story!
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