|Reviews for Paying Tribute To A Hero|
| Hina-Kmi chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
Very good indeed!
Just a little advise... You should make some kind of separation between the "scenes", so we can follow the story more easily.
Please update soon.
| rinny08 chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
I like this a lot. please update soon
| duj chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
"Snape's sister"? Will we get to meet her? I assume she's the laughing girl as Snape's broomstick bucks in one of thememories Harry sees during canon-occlumency lessons.
When did Hermione have Occlumency lessons? that was a bit unexpected.
BTW, I feel convinced that Snape guessed at Dumbledore's involvement in Sirius's escape as soon as the head told him "This door has been locked since I left the ward ten minutes ago..."
| B. M. Reed chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
It's pretty good so far, but I've noticed some rather agitating typos along the way. When you write, you apparently put slashes between a word you wish to make italicized, but you forget to italicize them. While this may not seem important, I can assure you it distracts me. In any case, apart from my complaint, I enjoyed reading this story and wish for you to continue.
| duj chapter 1 . 12/17/2005