Reviews for Paying Tribute To A Hero
Hina-Kmi chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
Very good indeed!

Just a little advise... You should make some kind of separation between the "scenes", so we can follow the story more easily.

Please update soon.
rinny08 chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
I like this a lot. please update soon
duj chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
"Snape's sister"? Will we get to meet her? I assume she's the laughing girl as Snape's broomstick bucks in one of thememories Harry sees during canon-occlumency lessons.

When did Hermione have Occlumency lessons? that was a bit unexpected.

BTW, I feel convinced that Snape guessed at Dumbledore's involvement in Sirius's escape as soon as the head told him "This door has been locked since I left the ward ten minutes ago..."
B. M. Reed chapter 2 . 12/17/2005
It's pretty good so far, but I've noticed some rather agitating typos along the way. When you write, you apparently put slashes between a word you wish to make italicized, but you forget to italicize them. While this may not seem important, I can assure you it distracts me. In any case, apart from my complaint, I enjoyed reading this story and wish for you to continue.
duj chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
Intriguing.
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