Reviews for The Hell Where Youth and Laughter Go
zombiedango chapter 5 . 12/22/2014
Wait...this means that he saw zim ! Dont tell me that you didn't pay mind to that detail! The dad should realize that he is normal, goddamnit! Right? Or no...? Idk... This story made me hate the dad so much that I want him dead in just 2 chapters. Also, wouldn't the dad wonder where his injuries went? The dad should be checking his son to see why he healed so fast. Not for-gah... Sorry I'm just feeling a little salty. Just some of the things i couldn't understand. I still like the story so far. Well, minus those things. But nobodies perfect. I just wished that the dad wasnt the bad guy. Although he neglects his children, he is my favorite adult because he is so goofy.
AnimeCub chapter 9 . 11/3/2014
Nice work man
Guest chapter 9 . 7/25/2013
Is it wrong that I'm chuckling so hard right now I want to explode into a full bound laugh
Guest chapter 3 . 7/25/2013
That is SICK twisted morbid and just plain SADISTIC
Colorful-Crap chapter 9 . 3/13/2011
Membrane deserved it! he wanted to kill his children, that's just sick. Zim is realy good at torture :D I would be happy if I just could be tere to see membrane die. yeah I would like that *dreamy look in face* ah I can see it alraidy... I LOVE THE STORY!
InsomniaticFrenchToast chapter 9 . 11/17/2007
When Zim tortures...he really tortures...I don't know if Membrane deserved that...But he was going to kill Dib and Gaz...Oh so many of my morals say NO but my wrath says...not enough. I loved it though! I love this story!
ConscienceCoward chapter 9 . 7/10/2007
That was a very good story. I loved the gore (is that how you spell it?) I really liked it. Good luck on your second one.
AH36 chapter 9 . 2/11/2007
Geez, Zim is brutal... Has he been taking lessons from Nny?
AH36 chapter 2 . 2/9/2007
Hollow Stares chapter 3 . 7/18/2006
175! Why! Gasp! That nearly MY IQ! creepy. wow. I feel smart. You made me feel smart. I love you!
Snafoo Kazoo chapter 9 . 7/12/2006
Aw. That's beautiful, and deliciously morbid. Simply wonderful. Although now I feel like I want to give Dib a hug... (sniffle)
Snafoo Kazoo chapter 8 . 7/12/2006
Woahboy. Torture. Heehee. (I'm totally loving this)
Snafoo Kazoo chapter 7 . 7/12/2006
Snafoo Kazoo chapter 6 . 7/12/2006
GO ZIM! You can do it! (waves a little red flag with the Irken Armada symbol on it) Wee! ... And I dun like Membrane. No sirree bob. (blows raspberry)
Snafoo Kazoo chapter 5 . 7/12/2006
Oh shit I don't like where this is going. (The Membrane part, not the making-out part... THAT was the good part...)
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