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reaver216 chapter 9 . 12/10/2016
good story it had some funny parts
reaver216 chapter 2 . 12/9/2016
there were three grammar errors in this chapter I saw: 1 you used there where you meant their 2 you used there instead of them and 3 you used on instead of off I don't know if anyone has said so to you and you said to copy & paste it but I can't do that
the chapters I've read so far have been really good and as for the design on her back I think hamishwarfare nailed that one
Rocker on chapter 1 . 10/31/2016
That's... Interesting.
Seth.Smelser chapter 9 . 4/2/2016
There is one funny thought that pops in my head and that is Patrick sneaks off to a bar furring pleakly's super boring kill me now speech. And winds up running into an old friend.
Seth.Smelser chapter 4 . 4/2/2016
So many spelling mistakes I can read it but its driving my ocd up the wall please fix them first you want to change mail to male you put gong in the place where gone was supposed to be and this is how you spell raise. I'm trying to not be mean but still it bugs me like crazy.
Sydney chapter 6 . 11/11/2013
Myrtle is such a meanie!
707cloud chapter 3 . 9/12/2012
cool, one qustion, who's Patrick Jensen?
Guest chapter 9 . 8/20/2012
27's Fury chapter 2 . 1/1/2009
Oh this is great so far! Hope you update soon!
stitch8000 chapter 9 . 6/14/2008
cool story
123qaz chapter 1 . 5/23/2008

I just love this story. It is so beautiful and funny. I hope you will write something as good as this soon.

I wish you good luck!

Your fan

joshuarule chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
what does lilo look in experiment form? can you put a description on the story? PLEASE? i need to know!
kinger810 chapter 5 . 6/10/2007
Ha1 I like that 626 owns Lilo. Great Idea
d chapter 1 . 10/29/2006
Tragic warrior chapter 9 . 10/15/2006
Good story. Hopefully you will continue with this story and write a sequel. That would be nice.
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