Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2016
Use the enter key, it'll help you with that text wall
no name chapter 1 . 7/17/2011
whoa i'm really lost. i dont even know what the story is about.
nejilover chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
way too short. put some space it between the end of a sentance and the beginning of a new one. other than that it was funny.
narutogirl14 chapter 1 . 5/14/2006
That has to be the dummist thing I have ever read!I love it!lol!
alie chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
hehehe...nice one!
alie chapter 1 . 3/14/2006
hehehe...nice one!
lil Kakashi chapter 1 . 1/10/2006
lil Kakashie-That sucked,write a better story next time.
MysteryLady-Tx chapter 1 . 12/25/2005
oh man, that was just EVIL pinche Kakashi...hehehe...THANKS:D
la bellatrix chapter 1 . 12/24/2005
estrela jem chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
LOL really funny!
fanfiction-library2 chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
lol, cute story. Since it was just one big paragraph, it was hard to read... but I liked it!
velka chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
it was funny _ and then in the end that he had allredy a dusin copies. But i dont relly lik when the text is like that. it's hard too read and you lost often where you are.
Krein Styrv chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
erm. abit comfusing. oh, scratch that, very confusing. i suggest leaving spaces between lines, and perhaps writing more.
IisME chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
not to be rude but. . . I could kinda tell this was your first humor fic. maybe try making it flow better so people arent confused just trying to read it? add a lil space in there too, too cramped.