|Reviews for Kiss and Don't Tell|
| Daki92 chapter 8 . 9/14/2011
Bah, she got off too easy
| The defenastrator chapter 8 . 6/3/2010
Lol public apology would be mandated for Kim anyway cause her and Ron would practically be a celebrity couple it would be all over the tabloids if she didn't
| The defenastrator chapter 6 . 6/3/2010
"I hope you know how much I love him. I mean, we've been friends forever, and now I've been feeling something totally new. And after all this time, I've opened up my mind and I see, he was always there for me." Really creative there and entire verse of "Could It Be" nearly word for word. Let me put it this way credit for the reference but that's only a tenth the reprimand for going way too far with it close sentance structure and about 5 or 6 original words is enough to make the reference with out being too blunt as to be copying.
| nigeltje chapter 1 . 11/23/2009
wow thats good
wel right hand salute and out
u got talent mate keep up the writting
| nigeltje chapter 4 . 9/9/2009
a vtol is from crysis isnt it
| Rye-bread chapter 8 . 10/17/2008
VERY INTERESTING! HOW COULD I HAVE MISSED THIS STORY?
Of course, it was Richard Sirois's artwork that got me started in K.P. fanfiction. And you took the same tack on the "Rich" character that I did: a scholar, a tactician, a fellow-mission'er. And you got the same reaction from MrDrP that I did for portraying a romance sitch between Rich and Kim.
Only my story is a little more serious.(Solo Mission, chpt.5)Unrequited love and all that soap opera stuff) Your story is more fun.
| Shrike176 chapter 8 . 8/19/2008
Good story, wished you had given us that epilogue you mentioned. Keep it coming!
| bigherb81 chapter 8 . 6/8/2007
Not bad not bad at all. I like the way Ron slightly flipped out and spilled some of the mmp a couple of times. As far as the ambiguity of ch. 6 it would have been more effective if Kim had been a little more confused about her feelings in the previous chapters. After her reaction in ch. 5 the end pretty much spoke for itself. The rest was pretty good though and would have worked perfectly if she didn't seem so determined to get fix things.
| CastaS chapter 8 . 10/19/2006
great story, i enjoyed it much
| samantha chapter 8 . 1/27/2006
maybe you should write mor! i come back to all my fav things writen and see if there is any more!
| Jaystar101 chapter 3 . 1/24/2006
Oh DUDE dat was cool thumbs three metres up high i always was a perticular fan to ron and tara
| Jaystar101 chapter 1 . 1/24/2006
its gud. realy gud. but one question. hus richard?
| Redbird1 chapter 1 . 1/14/2006
Well written but I have my own problems with Sirois's artwork in this case and consequently,this story. The ultimate in *Mary Sue-ism*...sorry.
| Ace Ian Combat chapter 8 . 1/8/2006
I wouldn't mind an epilogue. You did an excellent job!
| Deyinel chapter 8 . 1/7/2006
Bravo and two thumbs up! That's all I can say!