Reviews for Labyrinth: Immortal Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I CAN'T TAKE CLIFFHANGERS! Ok...I can, but it still ticks me off ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just loved this story and I can't wait to read the sequel! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why not kill the author. I can't see any "planned" sequel. You left everyone (including me) with a cliffhanger. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this chapter, especially the end. It was a nice shift from intense to playful. Nicely done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am furious with that selfish reviewer that destroyed my hope of at least STARTING the sequel. I can't believe I found you a scant month after you removed it ( Ah well. I understand writers block very very well and I know you will do as you said and finished it before posting in your own time when it is right and correct in your eyes. After all what is the point if you don't enjoy the exercise yourself? I have popped you on Author Alert so that I will be alerted when you are ready to share your fantastic gift was us again. Waiting patiently, Cassee |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey love this. But where is the sequel? Math is a surprise but I love how she went into caring for children 'goblins' due to the past and what she grew into. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know you said at one point that you weren't a fan fiction author. Well I'd like to say I think you were lying. :) That was just increadible. It was graceful and ethereal, there was no action, but somehow it felt like a rollercoaster. This was about the Fae and it felt like a Fae should. Well done! I'm very excited to read the sequel(s). |
![]() ![]() ![]() Simply beautiful. The care you take with your stories makes is admirable and I wish more writers (on this site and otherwise) wrote as you do. I just read this entire story today because I just couldn't set it aside. Can't wait to move on to the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...I think I should've picked the shower instead... Ow. The inhaler does NOTHING to placate the heart ache! (sniff!) Ow. Okay, this is getting out of hand.. (goes off to get chocolate, returns, and continues to read the next chapter) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really, Jareth, you shouldn't display such behavior in front of goblins, who were once highly impressionable children, might I add. ;) This was... heatedly heavy. ...I think I may need a cold shower... Or an inhaler... I'll stick to the inhaler for now. (goes off to read next chapter, regulating breathing with an inhaler) |
![]() ![]() ![]() besides that awful epilogue, this story was great! i loved it! wonderful job! i like the goblins, and cool idea making a point of the goblins having magic and Shove giving Sarah that gift. so happy Jareth and Sarah finally got together in the end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol, how uncomfortable would that be, having a hot romance with the Goblin King with a full audience of his subjects? Awful! Well, you did turn them into bene-friends, but I think I can handle it for now. I wonder what will happen next? |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am positively in love with this story. For several reasons, in fact. One, most of the Labyrinth stories I've read thus far have made it so there is romance between Sarah and Jareth immediately and "friends" ends up just meaning kissing and whatnot, which is rather annoying, given the circumstances. Second, I love the details. If there is one pet peeve I have about stories, it is lack of details, especially if it is a romance story. So, whereas some authors worry that the thick paragraphs of details are boring people, as long as it isn't five paragraphs about trees and is about the scene, what's going on, etc, I'm in love with it and you do it beautifully. (Which, considering this story is six years old, is amazing. I can only imagine how much better your writing is now as compared to then.) Third, I love how you've created Sarah's character. She's still true to her original character, in her obsession with Labyrinth and her relationship to the goblins, but she doesn't fall all over herself when Jareth is around like others portray her. She's subtly envious, but still calm. I like that. And fourth, this story takes a completely different spin than any other story. So, while it has some slight similarities, it is mostly different, which is refreshing. Overall, then, I am in love with this story, even if nothing has happened yet really. "I ain't even mad," as they say ;D |
![]() ![]() ![]() So far, I do enjoy this story quite a bit. It's fleshed out with details, the writing style is easy and fluid, and overall I'm in love with how you write thus far. Hopefully the plot/characters hold up, too, so I'll keep this on my faves for now so I don't forget about reading it :) (it's 12:21 am right now, so I probably won't get too far into reading it) |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such a great story! I didn't like the cliff hanger ending, knowing now reading there isn't a completed sequel. :(. I do hope you find inspiration to continue. I would love to read your other Laby fics. :) |