ok. i really, really want some goblins of my own who will go yell and chase after mean guys.

and i want a mysterious goblin king to take care of me as well.

Oh! Another update! Yay!

Yes, well, I'm glad to know you actually read my review. I love your Sarah and your Jareth. (Yay for Sarah-Jareth interaction in waking life!) Now, if only they'd get on with the mushy love bits that I so love to read.

(But don't take that as an excuse to stop writing well and just throw in the romance. Romance is all well and good, but a well-written story is better.)

And no, it hasn't started to reek yet. As a matter of fact, it's starting to smell rather like dishwashing soap. Lemon dishwashing soap.

oh. you so have my attention. i'm giggling like a mad woman over here.

the story is fun and a little humorous, but you still have the basic, solid elements of a good laybrinth story.

i'm so going to read more.

I think you capture both Jareth and Sarah better than anyone I've ever read. It was a pleasure reading this and I especially liked your goblins. I love reading stories about brownies and fairies and such, and your mischeivious little buggers fit right in. The only thing I can think to critisize is the slow moving pace of your story, but event that kind of fits. Please update soon!

Very good! I love how detailed it is, and how you've captured Sarah's voice. I eagerly await more!

excellent! i love that toby's friends are goblins. will jareth be making an appearance soon that isn't in a dream? keep writing.

poor jareth! i always feel he gets the short end of the stick in these stories but he makes such a good villain. have you read Double Back by ditchertypepersonBUM? it is one of the best laby fics i have ever read. great chapter.

o great enterence! i love the little book goblin.

this already has definite promise. i like the fact that she still sees and speaks to the goblins. when will jareth show up? keep writing.

Yeah, that's a great way to end a chapter. 'Oh I just had a dance with the smexiest being Underground and now I have to get up and go to a funeral. Whatever shal I wear?'

...dangly bits...

I can't believe no one has reviewed yet. Well, don't let that stop you writing. It's a VERY rare occurance in which I choose to leave a review, but this story is off to such a good start, and hasn't gotten any reviews, that I thought I'd give you a push. So, unless this story turns into something that even the Bog of Stench would reject, I'll keep reading it.

On to Chapter 2!