Reviews for Labyrinth: Immortal Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "Jareth", she said, and then the bowl crashed on the floor with a dramatic thunder ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It certainly doesn't "reek so badly that even the Bog of Stench would throw it back" as you say in your note, but I'm sure the reviewers, favorites and follows before me made that clear. I guess writing characters is always tricky, only we don't always realise it. Plus, seeing how we all have our own interpretation... A character being OOC must be completly subjective (except in some gruesome examples *cough* My Immortal *cough*). But your Sarah doesn't seem completely alien ; so far I only feel that she grew up (which is good seeing how that's kind of the point of your story if I read the abstract and the title of the first chapter... Aren't I clever. Ahem.) and became more mature. Which is realy nice to read. The story seems more... Relaxed. It feels good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() We're discovering more of the lore, and even get Action *.*. How could I not be please with this chapter ? My mind is already demanding the next one ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() First chapter, and I already know I want to read the whole story. Now. Within the next hour. Let's go. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "You are still in his heart"-a gorgeous, shining line |
![]() ![]() I'm really enjoying this chapter a ton. Absolutely amazing writing! D Cheers. tale tall |
![]() ![]() A really amazing job of writing when Sarah learns of how things came to be from Jareth's point-of-view. D Keep it up! ********** 0 |
![]() ![]() Pretty good chapter of when Sarah and Jareth meet one another again. Great job on these 2! U this meeting this meeting. |
![]() ![]() Great story. Very inspiring, and fun to read. U toremember to remember |
![]() ![]() So I read your profile and am devastated for you that your computer disc decided to misbehave like that. I have had the same thing happen to me. I notice you said that the sequel to this was lost in the aforementioned tragedy and I am wondering will you attempt to rewrite it and post it? I know that something so important (and obviously well planned) would be an effort to rewrite and very agonizing to the author, but I really do hope you can get around to posting the sequel. If you cannot I would like you to know that you have made it ok to be public about my love for this couple (also I LOVE Shove). The way you characterize is so great and you are such an engaging writer. I couldn't stop reading this after I started. Again, best of luck and good computer vibes to you. Thank you very much for writing this. It is AMAZING. -AJ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it, but yes this ending does bring out the long knives. Now off to hunt the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() IT'S NOT FAIR!-she shrieked like a banshee. *sigh* I seem to have a knack for finding and falling in love with fics that either are on indefinite hiatus or apparently have been eaten by the evil computer god. However, I totally understand falling victim to that vindictive and fickle god-he wiped my first laptop four times before I stopped resurrecting her, leaving me with an almost superstitious addiction to flash drives, external hard drives, email copies, and a penchant for writing things out the old fashioned way with pen and ink before ever even looking at a computer. *sigh* I'll survive not getting to find out what happened to Jareth and Sarah in your gloriously imagined, beautifully written, sinfully addictive fanfiction that reached out to caress my inner (recovering) fangirl and then dragged me mercilessly back into reading far too much fanfiction than is good for me. But in all seriousness, I absolutely adore what you do with Sarah and Jareth (in all of your fics, not just this one), and even if you receive this review long after you've set down your fanficiton-pen, I hope you know that your work still lives on and continues to torture-I mean thrill-fangirls everywhere in a manner that I very much believe the Goblin King would approve of. My sincerest thanks to you for sharing these lovely works with the rest of us mere mortals. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sequel? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please, say that you're still working on the sequal? I found this story on a Labyrinth binge months ago and just found it again. I love it. So I'm hoping that you'll get to a point of posting the seqal/prequal soon! Take care |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you're doing a great job |