Reviews for Wira Digital
Bluesv20 chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Interesting plot so far nice to see something new.
Dark Qiviut chapter 1 . 12/17/2005
I'm extremely impressed with this chapter, Alforce. I enjoyed the pilot chapter.

I like on *how* the cultures have been tied into here. It was very unique and sweet in some ways. Liu, Gayathri, and Adam seem to become a great team.

Also, the way the characters were introduced: It really flowed in here. The flow of the whole chapter was very steady. It was just... perfect.

As for the action, it was fantastic. The action was very realistic. It flowed very well. The description for it was perfect.

The structure was perfect. It was readable, realistic, and sensical. It all tied down very nicely, and it was very interesting from top to bottom. It's a great start to where, I believe, will be a great fanfic.

Great start to the story, Alforce. You started it off with a tremendous bang, you got me interested. Keep it up!
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